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it   hangs over her bed

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with sinister smile, a

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lipstick—smeared

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with awful strings


it    is despicable in the dark

she’s not scared of    it

it’s     not frightened at all


         b u t         i am


i     can’t lay my finger on     it

nor        can i pinpoint      it


that   c l o w n i s h     grin

it’s           e y e s      follow me


i pull the   c o v e r s      over my head

and peek from      time  t o  time —

— at      it,    as the clock whittles sharply

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11/26/2017
IT Contest
John lawless - Sponsor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

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Tripp Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 7:18 PM
Congratulations! This is fantastic. Love the way you formatted it.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Rhoda!
Dutta Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Wonderful creation. Congrats Kim to win. love
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 3:59 PM
Thanks, Anisha!
Mohn Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 9:07 PM
incredibly creative Kim…congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Thank you, David!
Davey Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Awesome format and great write for the contest, congratulations on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, Brian!
Roper Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Awesome, Kim, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, Eve! Hugs!
Lawless Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 11:25 AM
OK, Kim, the presentation slowed the clock as this reader checked overhead...just in case. Nicely done, I feel the scattered presentation worked well for this piece. Thanks for entering the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 11:27 AM
Thanks so much for second place! Excited!
Daniel Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Well done, Kim, great layout too:)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, Jo!
Hoffman Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 9:19 PM
Marionette clowns or clowns of any kind can be scary; but this is downright eerie Kim!(I'd be peek a booing at it too!) Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Thanks so much! :)
Pandit Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 12:59 PM
A beautiful architecture adorns this poem!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Cozart Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 12:47 PM
This is so clever!! Awesome!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Thanks, Dale! I appreciate!
Michael Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Wonderful...So creative and fun..Loved it, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Thank you, Arturo! <3
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