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it   hangs over her bed

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with sinister smile, a

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lipstick—smeared

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with awful strings


it    is despicable in the dark

she’s not scared of    it

it’s     not frightened at all


         b u t         i am


i     can’t lay my finger on     it

nor        can i pinpoint      it


that   c l o w n i s h     grin

it’s           e y e s      follow me


i pull the   c o v e r s      over my head

and peek from      time  t o  time —

— at      it,    as the clock whittles sharply

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11/26/2017
IT Contest
John lawless - Sponsor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/16/2017 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations! This is fantastic. Love the way you formatted it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2017 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Rhoda!
Date: 12/14/2017 11:57:00 AM
Wonderful creation. Congrats Kim to win. love
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2017 3:59:00 PM
Thanks, Anisha!
Date: 12/13/2017 9:07:00 PM
incredibly creative Kim…congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 9:30:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 12/13/2017 12:21:00 PM
Awesome format and great write for the contest, congratulations on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Brian!
Date: 12/13/2017 11:55:00 AM
Awesome, Kim, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! Hugs!
Date: 12/13/2017 11:25:00 AM
OK, Kim, the presentation slowed the clock as this reader checked overhead...just in case. Nicely done, I feel the scattered presentation worked well for this piece. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 11:27:00 AM
Thanks so much for second place! Excited!
Date: 11/27/2017 7:49:00 AM
Well done, Kim, great layout too:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thanks, Jo!
Date: 11/26/2017 9:19:00 PM
Marionette clowns or clowns of any kind can be scary; but this is downright eerie Kim!(I'd be peek a booing at it too!) Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2017 9:21:00 PM
Thanks so much! :)
Date: 11/26/2017 12:59:00 PM
A beautiful architecture adorns this poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2017 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 11/26/2017 12:47:00 PM
This is so clever!! Awesome!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2017 12:53:00 PM
Thanks, Dale! I appreciate!
Date: 11/26/2017 12:11:00 PM
Wonderful...So creative and fun..Loved it, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2017 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo! <3
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