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Isthmus of Time

ISTHMUS OF TIME e b o n y capes with d e r v i s h eyes, transfixed on my pulse countdown of cheering red wine goblets cascading so much ~ time ~ spendthrift fragile hours cutting deep veins salting them with tears brain clings to side of pot zombie moon’s hosting party 10/23/2017 Deep and Dark II Contest by Laura Loo
1st place

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Date: 11/6/2017 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderfully dark win, Kim - blessings, and keep up the great work! :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2017 5:39:00 AM
Thank you, Greg! :)
Date: 10/28/2017 10:27:00 PM
Love the shape and write, Kim, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2017 5:15:00 AM
Thank you Eve xx
Date: 10/27/2017 10:49:00 PM
Very cool format for such a fantastic free verse. I love your poem here, Kim. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2017 5:14:00 AM
Thank you, Afzal!
Date: 10/27/2017 1:05:00 PM
Very creative indeed, congrats on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2017 4:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Brian!
Date: 10/23/2017 8:05:00 PM
Very clever, dark and creative Kim; good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Cheryl!

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