Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Isthmus of Time

ISTHMUS OF TIME

e b o n y capes with d e r v i s h
eyes, transfixed on my pulse
countdown of cheering
red wine goblets
cascading
so much
~ time ~
spendthrift
fragile hours
cutting deep veins
salting them with tears
brain clings to side of pot
zombie moon’s hosting party

10/23/2017

Deep and Dark II
Contest by Laura Loo
1st place

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Gregory Richard Barden November 6, 2017 at 12:37 AM Congratulations on your wonderfully dark win, Kim - blessings, and keep up the great work! :-) Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2017 at 5:39 AM Thank you, Greg! :)

Eve Roper October 28, 2017 at 10:27 PM Love the shape and write, Kim, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve ~`* Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2017 at 5:15 AM Thank you Eve xx

Afzal Nusker October 27, 2017 at 10:49 PM Very cool format for such a fantastic free verse. I love your poem here, Kim. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2017 at 5:14 AM Thank you, Afzal!

Brian Davey October 27, 2017 at 1:05 PM Very creative indeed, congrats on your win Kim Rodrigues October 27, 2017 at 4:53 PM Thanks so much, Brian!

Cheryl Hoffman October 23, 2017 at 8:05 PM Very clever, dark and creative Kim; good luck in the contest!~Che :) Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2017 at 8:06 PM Thanks so much, Cheryl!