Isolation

see, isolation
        kills ideas, hopes and dreams
              share some tenderness

arthaiku

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Funom Makama

January 25, 2016 at 11:16 AM

Beautifully woven words as well prepared seeds for a perfect germination on any reading mind. An awesome 7 dearest poet

White Sage

January 25, 2016 at 3:29 PM

thanks Funom

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2016 at 9:02 PM

this is a lovely little poem I have found here.

White Sage

January 23, 2016 at 11:30 AM

thanks Andrea, i appreciate your words

Michael Whatley

January 16, 2016 at 5:47 PM

True indeed. Well interpreted White!

White Sage

January 16, 2016 at 6:00 PM

thanks Michael...

Legendary Legend

January 14, 2016 at 4:59 AM

nice piece of advice.....short nd powerful poem..

Beautiful Scars

January 13, 2016 at 3:48 PM

yes! let us all share tenderness...very emotive, -luloo *smiles*

White Sage

January 13, 2016 at 4:23 PM

thanks for coming by Laura...sharing tenderness in spoken words, written words, daily doings...will make the world a better place

Paul Callus

January 13, 2016 at 1:33 PM

It is in sharing that we give and receive. It's said that no man is an island, but there are moments when solitude can also be very beneficial. Lovely haiku. // paul

White Sage

January 13, 2016 at 2:40 PM

thanks Paul...surely solitude can be good at times, but what happens when a man becomes an island, which even the waters dread to flow and touch, an island where the breeze dare not hit? then that surely will make the view so pale...being isolated is so saddening on its own