Isolation

see, isolation kills ideas, hopes and dreams share some tenderness

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/25/2016 11:16:00 AM

Beautifully woven words as well prepared seeds for a perfect germination on any reading mind. An awesome 7 dearest poet

White Sage
Date: 1/25/2016 3:29:00 PM

thanks Funom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2016 9:02:00 PM

this is a lovely little poem I have found here.

White Sage
Date: 1/23/2016 11:30:00 AM

thanks Andrea, i appreciate your words

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/16/2016 5:47:00 PM

True indeed. Well interpreted White!

White Sage
Date: 1/16/2016 6:00:00 PM

thanks Michael...

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/14/2016 4:59:00 AM

nice piece of advice.....short nd powerful poem..

Lu Loo

Date: 1/13/2016 3:48:00 PM

yes! let us all share tenderness...very emotive, -luloo *smiles*

White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 4:23:00 PM

thanks for coming by Laura...sharing tenderness in spoken words, written words, daily doings...will make the world a better place

Paul Callus

Date: 1/13/2016 1:33:00 PM

It is in sharing that we give and receive. It's said that no man is an island, but there are moments when solitude can also be very beneficial. Lovely haiku. // paul

White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 2:40:00 PM

thanks Paul...surely solitude can be good at times, but what happens when a man becomes an island, which even the waters dread to flow and touch, an island where the breeze dare not hit? then that surely will make the view so pale...being isolated is so saddening on its own