Isn'T It Cool How We Have It These Days

Isn't cool how we have it these days... You wake up around 7:00 get out of bed, Do you turn on your lights, or open your blinds instead? After you eat brekfast, get dressed and brush your teeth, Do you go outside and soak up that spring morning sun, Or close the windows an turn up the heat? When done with school about 3 or 4, Do you text your friends or do somthing more? Maybe go for a walk, even a jog. Do you look at the sky with your head heald high, Or look at the ground as it passes you by? I wonder if we could survive without lights, cars, or streets, But only nature saying "I'm here can't you see, you were just to busy to notice me" I hope we can all do better in our lives And notice nature trying to strive Isn't it cool how we have it these days?! Just look around, you'll notice the haze.... Feb. 24, 2010

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Date: 12/12/2011 9:57:00 PM
this is really nice, including everyone and not just yourself in the challenge of the write! Congrats on your win, RAchelle.
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Date: 12/14/2011 10:51:00 AM
In the History Of One Day i wanted to express how we all go through our lives in too much of a routine everyday,.. Thanks you :) Thank you all for your continuing support!
Date: 12/12/2011 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Frank's "A History Of One Day" contest Rachell. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2011 10:48:00 AM
thank you! :)
Date: 12/10/2011 10:37:00 AM
RACHELLE, congratulations in FRANK'S contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.
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Date: 12/14/2011 10:47:00 AM
Thanks you! :)
Date: 12/10/2011 9:02:00 AM
A thought provoking write.Congrats Rachelle on your win.
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:26:00 AM
Thank you so much! ~ I am over joyed :D
Date: 12/10/2011 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a day x
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:24:00 AM
This is incredable~ and Thank you! :D
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