Island of Shadow

In some imaginations of life,
in some life’s paths you came everyday, 
the moment united 
When golden rails meet somewhere ,
when sky’s desires falls as snow , 
I am hearing the same sound, in my heart
Without telling each other every word is getting conveyed, 
every striking glance 
which doesn’t stay in the eyes are meeting
we are flowing in an island made of shadow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Danie Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 3:34 AM
Short & Well penned :) A~D
Swaminathan Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 11:35 PM
lovely vinayak,lovely, i imagine the entire thing as a film cut
Pratap Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 2:52 AM
Thank you niki ~V~
A   Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 6:35 PM
Vinayak, i definitely feel like the poem above... my imaginations keeps me above the sand...love this...LINDA
Pratap Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 10:02 PM
thanks for your nice comments linda
Palli Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 3:15 AM
Excellent! I enjoyed the write.
Pratap Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 12:23 AM
thank you susan for your nice comment
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