Island of Fantasy

sun is hanging ten as we ride sea's rolling waves. . . . a paradise found sun spreads marmalade in our late warm afternoon. . . . the sky eats it up twilight's sky drips red a tryst whispered on the wind. . . we embrace the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gupta Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Lovely ... Congratulations ....
Grasso Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. I like the way you formatted this poem. It reflects the light and airy theme of the poem. Really well done! ...Fran
Flower Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Now those haiku lines...I can't get over them, Andrea. Simply beautiful. Congrats on the placement!
Scars Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 7:11 AM
Andrea, a beautiful haiku, love this,congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Misra Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Loved the haiku's. ~karam~
Smith Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 7:21 PM
I never have to look far down the winners list to find your name Andrea, congratulations again...
Negron Flores Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations Andrea on the Island of Fantasy contest.
A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:12 PM
so pretty.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Hi Andrea.. I judged my contest today but could not find your entry luv.. did u enter? I was so upset not to see a poem I know u wrote right? well pleaser let me know what hapened ..please.. thankxxx..luv..
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 4:07 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..I am glad that I chose this one for the descriptive lines brought me to the beach in summer..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
Babcock Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Just where I want to be on the beach at sunset instead of snow laden ground . love phyl
Puddifoot Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 3:33 PM
congrats on another contest win andrea! most impressive haiku trio, the second one is outstanding, toasty and tasty :-)
Austin Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 2:06 PM
A veritable feast, dear Andrea. Love, daver
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Congrats Andrea on a brilliant win with this incredible set of Haikus my friend.. awesome as always ..visual delights...luv..
Fisher Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 11:23 AM
Many congrats Andrea - a well deserved win - luv Janette
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November 8, 2011 at 7:35 AM
Congrats my dear Andea.. a wonderful write and win for you....luv Michael
Deane Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Lovely Haiku's, congrats to you for your win in PD's contest...luv shannon
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 1:26 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, love the idea of sun spreading marmalade, fantastic..David
Arowolo Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 1:26 AM
Awesome write,Andrea.Congratulations on your well deserved win....nice trio....
Song Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:18 PM
Oh,...okay...Hang Ten, girl....I get it now. Thanks for the explanation. I think there used to be a clothing line or T shirt company named Hang Ten too. My poor memory is waning. I like your haiku entry bc u tried to touch on more than one thot and encompassed everything PD was throwing out there! I can always expect to be mentally stretched while reading your work...Gwendolen
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November 7, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Andrea~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Song Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:31 PM
Such fun and inviting scenes in your triple dipple haiku, Andrea. What does hang ten reference? It sounds sooo familiar. Been very busy working and with skool...there are soooo many contests which is great...gives all these poets something fun to do. I can only enter a couple...don't even have time to post much. I will read more as time allows...great to read your work again. Luv, Gwendolen.
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November 7, 2011 at 4:27 PM
wonderful Haikus, Andrea, only back for five minutes, glad i caught these. love, harry
Susan Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 11:12 AM
fantastic ideas and imagery! love them all! but if i had to pick a favorite, i would pick the 2nd one - sun like marmalade on toast. very creative! i bet pd will love these too :)
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