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Island Days

I lift the sleeve of time and years
To a little grass hut that brings wistful tears
for fragrant leis and Koa bowls
For rainbows arc-and friendly souls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Leffanta Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 12:00 PM
Wow! You must be quite old to remember friendly souls! Aloha!
Delaney Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:53 PM
Hi Rico: Sounds like you haven’t visited the Friendly Isle. I have visited every island in Hawaii and Molokai was the most unfriendly. I gues it can depend on your age group but whatever stage of life I am in I always find friends. I hope the same for you. Aloha, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 4:25 AM
Very poetic opening line that sets the stage for the beauty that follows. A beautiful poem, SuZ.
Delaney Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:49 PM
Thanks Vijay: Appreciate your welcome visits. Best, SuZ
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