Island Days

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I lift the sleeve of time and years To a little grass hut that brings wistful tears for fragrant leis and Koa bowls For rainbows arc-and friendly souls.

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/28/2022 12:00:00 PM

Wow! You must be quite old to remember friendly souls! Aloha!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/28/2022 1:53:00 PM

Hi Rico: Sounds like you haven’t visited the Friendly Isle. I have visited every island in Hawaii and Molokai was the most unfriendly. I gues it can depend on your age group but whatever stage of life I am in I always find friends. I hope the same for you. Aloha, SuZ

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/28/2022 4:25:00 AM

Very poetic opening line that sets the stage for the beauty that follows. A beautiful poem, SuZ.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/28/2022 1:49:00 PM

Thanks Vijay: Appreciate your welcome visits. Best, SuZ