Island

stranded and stuck 
           in a 
 solitary Island,
  I see 
        the shimmering
 shades of sapphire
           and 
              nothing 
                      else.

anxietylonelinessseaverse

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:22:00 AM

Dear valsa, Youv delivered something so very appealing for an islander, in such a creative and poetic manner! I love your use of gems and alliterations as well as how youv presented your poem here is so very impressive! An exquisite take on " island" thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:45:00 AM

- Congratulations on your micro poem, Valsa :) - hugs

JCB Brul

Date: 5/8/2025 12:53:00 AM

Lovely! The use of fine alliterations makes this poem irresistible! Congratulations!.Definitely a FAVE!! Stay creative!^___^ JCB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2025 11:55:00 PM

Love this one. So aptly described for island

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2025 7:30:00 PM

Dear Valsa, what a fantastic poem! The fundamental topic focuses on emotions of isolation and confinement, as expressed by the metaphor of being "stranded and stuck" on a "solitary Island." The picture of "shimmering colors of sapphire" evokes beauty and charm, yet it contrasts sharply with the notion of solitude, emphasizing a sense of longing or unfulfilled desire. The poem examines the conflict between the exterior beauty of the surroundings and the speaker's emotional struggle, stressing a sense of imprisonment despite the vividness of the environment.

Jay Narain

Date: 4/30/2025 10:48:00 AM

Great poem. On a solitary Island, you can enjoy some solitude and meditation. When you get hungry, raise your sos flag. Someone will see and help you.

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 4/30/2025 6:07:00 AM

Sending you some help, Valsa. Good luck with the contest. This is simply a beautiful piece.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2025 3:40:00 AM

Well, if I start thinking about it, I don't think all happy thoughts. The sapphire water reads of a beautiful spot. I enjoyed reading it and enjoying your creativity. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2025 2:08:00 AM

- S.O.S. ... I'll come with my boat this afternoon and save you, Valsa :) - Enjoy the view while you wait :) - Great poem - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Valsa George
Date: 4/30/2025 4:44:00 AM