Island

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                                         lost boat
                              in tempest but swam on
                  sinking hope, a defoliated lone tree in a
      desolate island far from secure longing shore, anchorage
abandoned, an insular being stranded in the realm of remote sea
~~~~~~~~~within the aquarium of alien waves~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 11:13 AM
Great shape and imagism Subimal. Your ancient sailor is excellent! Love it! Congratulations! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 6:26 PM
Love love love this!!
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