Isis

Isis trawls the Nile, Finds thirteen dismembered parts, The phallus missing, Sings, resurrects Osiris, Fashions gold phallus, conceives.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/25/2011 12:58:00 PM

… special KUDOS to you for a captivating win!...huggs!

David Williams

Date: 8/25/2011 8:38:00 AM

hey Jack congrats on your win David

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2011 7:55:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/25/2011 7:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Tracie's "Write like an Egyptian" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 8/24/2011 11:37:00 PM

Superb Jack. We went for the same Goddess eh? Many congrats for this win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/24/2011 10:23:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your winning poem in this contest with this wonderful expressive piece my friend...lovely ...one of my favs...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/24/2011 9:12:00 PM

good trick aye? the start of the toy business? ;) congrad'son yourwin. light & love

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/6/2011 9:51:00 PM

Awesome write mate...love old Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2011 12:33:00 AM

Gosh, what a cool tanka. For the Egyptian contest?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2011 8:51:00 PM

Woooo!!Those people had some more imagination..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/2/2011 6:15:00 PM

wow.. a wonderful tale of the 'gods' Jack.. a golden phallus ..wow..another one of the wonders of the world luv.. must keep this in mind..haha.. good luck with this winning piece .. a stunner ...