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Is This the Top Floor

When we reach the top floor we wonder
What was it all about, this life we just experienced
Is there any other way of describing it
Is there a higher high or is this it?
NOPE... THIS BE IT!

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Gershon Wolf

September 29, 2022 at 9:53 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Think about it: The top FLOOR... Only up from there!! lol.

Jack Ellison

October 2, 2022 at 4:36 AM

The top floor be it!!! No turning back now... just pretty flowers and pretty women!!! Zowie!

Line Gauthier

September 27, 2022 at 6:15 AM

And the view just keeps getting better and better ~ happy belated birthday, Jack!

Jack Ellison

September 27, 2022 at 9:24 AM

It sure does... thanks very much Line! XOX

Sand Blown

September 26, 2022 at 3:42 PM

...for the elevator and stairs sir....time is now however, and all that be perceived is only effects of constant universal/cosmic processes (for which there be mathematical 'gliders' on the roof sir...........cofhmmph.......stan sand

Sand Blown

September 28, 2022 at 4:51 PM

,,,modern mathematics is like an 'alices' wonder land.....sorry for my poor 'elevator operator' imitation....stan

Jack Ellison

September 26, 2022 at 6:24 PM

Uhh... yes... I agree... methinks! Have a good nighty-nite! Cheers

L Milton Hankins

September 26, 2022 at 9:42 AM

No top floor, Jack. The elevator of life just keeps going up and up!

Jack Ellison

September 26, 2022 at 10:14 AM

Well said good friend... have a good day!

Tom Cunningham

September 26, 2022 at 8:43 AM

And as a famous Irish comedian said, " and there's more" keep going and aim high. Tom

Jack Ellison

September 26, 2022 at 10:13 AM

If we had all the answers, it would be no fun! Nothing to look forward to!

Michael Tor

September 26, 2022 at 8:39 AM

Jack there is a purpose for our lives. It is called the great commission to share God's truth of his son who died for us so we can be allowed into his heavenly kingdom by just believing in him... We are to share this with all of mankind so no one perishes and succumbs to Gods judgement. That is our purpose, to worship him, and to feel his love and his blessings for doing so. Having a loving relationship with him and helping others that are in need. We must think of others and not ourselves...

Jack Ellison

September 26, 2022 at 10:10 AM

I appreciate and admire your dedication Michael! Cheers!

Michael Tor

September 26, 2022 at 8:40 AM

Be blessed my friend. Have joy in your heart, for he is knocking, be so grateful and let him in. Thanks for listening Jack. Have a wonderful day...

Jeff Kyser

September 26, 2022 at 4:10 AM

Charlie's glass elevator didn't have a stop. It kept going up and went right through the top. They ended up meeting a Vermicious Knid. So careful which buttons you're pushing there, kid!.

Jack Ellison

September 26, 2022 at 5:19 AM

Did some research..."An indie rock band from Brantford, Ontario" ain't the internet grand!" Will be more careful next time LOL

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