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Is This the Top Floor

When we reach the top floor we wonder What was it all about, this life we just experienced Is there any other way of describing it Is there a higher high or is this it? NOPE... THIS BE IT!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/29/2022 9:53:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Think about it: The top FLOOR... Only up from there!! lol.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/2/2022 4:36:00 AM

The top floor be it!!! No turning back now... just pretty flowers and pretty women!!! Zowie!

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/27/2022 6:15:00 AM

And the view just keeps getting better and better ~ happy belated birthday, Jack!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/27/2022 9:24:00 AM

It sure does... thanks very much Line! XOX

Sand Blown

Date: 9/26/2022 3:42:00 PM

...for the elevator and stairs sir....time is now however, and all that be perceived is only effects of constant universal/cosmic processes (for which there be mathematical 'gliders' on the roof sir...........cofhmmph.......stan sand

Sand Blown
Date: 9/28/2022 4:51:00 PM

,,,modern mathematics is like an 'alices' wonder land.....sorry for my poor 'elevator operator' imitation....stan

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/26/2022 6:24:00 PM

Uhh... yes... I agree... methinks! Have a good nighty-nite! Cheers

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/26/2022 11:49:00 AM

There’s just a new set of buttons up there. Keep going! Fly high! I see those wings ;)

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/26/2022 1:37:00 PM

It's not my wings, they're in good shape, it's my motor! LOL Actualy my motor is doing pretty damn good as well! Yeehaw! Love from the happy one XOX

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/26/2022 9:42:00 AM

No top floor, Jack. The elevator of life just keeps going up and up!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/26/2022 10:14:00 AM

Well said good friend... have a good day!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/26/2022 8:43:00 AM

And as a famous Irish comedian said, " and there's more" keep going and aim high. Tom

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/26/2022 10:13:00 AM

If we had all the answers, it would be no fun! Nothing to look forward to!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2022 8:39:00 AM

Jack there is a purpose for our lives. It is called the great commission to share God's truth of his son who died for us so we can be allowed into his heavenly kingdom by just believing in him... We are to share this with all of mankind so no one perishes and succumbs to Gods judgement. That is our purpose, to worship him, and to feel his love and his blessings for doing so. Having a loving relationship with him and helping others that are in need. We must think of others and not ourselves...

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/26/2022 10:10:00 AM

I appreciate and admire your dedication Michael! Cheers!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/26/2022 8:40:00 AM

Be blessed my friend. Have joy in your heart, for he is knocking, be so grateful and let him in. Thanks for listening Jack. Have a wonderful day...

Jeff Kyser

Date: 9/26/2022 4:10:00 AM

Charlie's glass elevator didn't have a stop. It kept going up and went right through the top. They ended up meeting a Vermicious Knid. So careful which buttons you're pushing there, kid!.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/26/2022 5:19:00 AM

Did some research..."An indie rock band from Brantford, Ontario" ain't the internet grand!" Will be more careful next time LOL