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Is This Ok

I sit here, with you in mind, with every moment losing time, having to pay attention again and again, always by another friend, when I finally have time to talk to you, all of your day has followed through and you sleep and you dream, even as I fall at the seam, I just hope that you understand, that I try as hard as I can, I promise to you that I will say I love you every time

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Date: 1/14/2011 11:44:00 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 3:39:00 AM
Poignant - lovely - Liz
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