Is This Ok

I sit here, with you in mind,
with every moment losing time,
having to pay attention again and again,
always by another friend,
when I finally have time to talk to you,
all of your day has followed through
and you sleep and you dream,
even as I fall at the seam,
I just hope that you understand,
that I try as hard as I can,
I promise to you that I
will say I love you every time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 11:44 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Andrew. Love, Carol
Walsh Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 3:39 AM
Poignant - lovely - Liz
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