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Is This Love

In the darkness a flicker of moonlight, shadows dance. Kissing her long and sweetly teasing, capturing her sigh craze delight, she let out a moan unobtrusively. "I love you. I murmured, "Just you and I." You make my body sing and my heart soar. Is this called love, or is it just a lie? I found my happiness I yearn for more. I lie and daydream to belong to her, feeling so incomplete and so helpless; in me an ache causing a storm to stir, holding forever leaving me breathless. Never had to think of no one throughout, had only myself to worry about. 7/11/2017

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Date: 7/20/2017 7:25:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 7/19/2017 1:15:00 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:59:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet, romantic and emotive...the kind of love that leaves you breathless! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/16/2017 1:39:00 PM
Romantic and sensual Eve, enjoyed it tonight :)
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Date: 7/16/2017 8:56:00 AM
so well expressed
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Date: 7/16/2017 5:38:00 AM
Beautifully penned Eve, loved the song too...
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Date: 7/14/2017 12:54:00 PM
We all crave to cleave to another Eve. You have expressed that longing so well here.
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Date: 7/14/2017 12:37:00 PM
This is so beautiful and romantic. And beautifully expressed :)
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Date: 7/14/2017 5:45:00 AM
Masterful romantic and sensual Sonnet my friend, Eve! Good luck! Great music to go with!
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Date: 7/13/2017 7:51:00 PM
a very reflective one, Eve. I love its sense of longing and romance.
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Date: 7/13/2017 4:57:00 PM
Very clear in presenting the depths of love's fire and how the mind dwells on nothing else when being so consumed. Spectacular sonnet with sweet emotional depths.. A pleasure to read my friend...
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2017 5:04:00 PM
Thank you, Robert
Date: 7/13/2017 2:17:00 PM
Lovely and sensual eve good luck in the contest:-)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2017 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Jan
Date: 7/13/2017 11:08:00 AM
So romantic and sensual and beautifully written!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2017 11:28:00 AM
You are a sweetheart , thank you ~*
Date: 7/13/2017 9:28:00 AM
Beautifully expressed emotions ... Nice Sonnet ...
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Probir ~*
Date: 7/12/2017 11:03:00 PM
Very well-crafted sonnet Eve...whispers of love...best of luck...^WW^
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2017 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, ^ WW ^
Date: 7/12/2017 1:20:00 PM
ew la la... Pretty spicy stuff Mrs Eve.Great sonnet! Certainly had my attention:) Good luck!
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Date: 7/12/2017 12:43:00 PM
ohh, sweetly emotive with superb language, eve... i was captivated!.. huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2017 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, Nette
Date: 7/12/2017 6:11:00 AM
This was really nice Eve. Best wishes in the contest
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Chris
Date: 7/12/2017 2:29:00 AM
Excellent Eve! This is sure to impress! : )
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2017 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, Connie
Date: 7/12/2017 12:57:00 AM
Aww, so romantic, Eve, should do well:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/13/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thank you, Jo

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