Is This Love?

She so fine and Beuatiful as a dove
 I wonder if she has any bruises
 When she fell from above
 Your Smile takes my Breath Away
 Your Smile Makes my Heart Stop Playing Drums
 The Star that Gives us Light Will Soon Die
 Until that day comes
 This beuatiful girl will Smile
 And Then be title the New Sun
 Tha New Light
 I can talk to you all night long
 Cause your voice reminds me of a Melodie
 Your voice is So Soothing
When your on my Thoughts
 I get this Sensation
 But i just dont know what it is
 Like Marley Said is 
This Love That im Feeling??
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 21, 2010 at 6:07 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Giovani. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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September 20, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed this piece... check out the contest scene.. there is a current one Love Notes.. u should enter this one and good luck with luv...
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September 19, 2010 at 6:07 PM
sounds like it to me....good start and fine poem!
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September 19, 2010 at 5:06 PM
Nice and cute, the feeling of a sweet thought, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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