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Is This Love?

She so fine and Beuatiful as a dove I wonder if she has any bruises When she fell from above Your Smile takes my Breath Away Your Smile Makes my Heart Stop Playing Drums The Star that Gives us Light Will Soon Die Until that day comes This beuatiful girl will Smile And Then be title the New Sun Tha New Light I can talk to you all night long Cause your voice reminds me of a Melodie Your voice is So Soothing When your on my Thoughts I get this Sensation But i just dont know what it is Like Marley Said is This Love That im Feeling??

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/21/2010 6:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Giovani. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2010 8:19:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed this piece... check out the contest scene.. there is a current one Love Notes.. u should enter this one and good luck with luv...
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:07:00 PM
sounds like it to me....good start and fine poem!
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Date: 9/19/2010 5:06:00 PM
Nice and cute, the feeling of a sweet thought, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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