Is This a Recipe For Happy Soup

I am so unsure what to do
Because I don't really know you
But my heart says find a way
As my words are not child's play

There must therefore be time for us to both discover
If we are maybe right for each other
And if I keep adding to the soup
I might just then win you over

But to make sure we always have fun
I will add my humour and then some
And as my heart you have already won
My recipe must be one

That cooks up such a lifelong treat
That we just don't meet and greet
But fall in the soup recipe
To always be as happy
As we can ever be

I will always add some spice
And continue cooking all that's nice
And together we can live life
Forever together to always be
Not just for our love of Poetry 

As nothing I will ever do  
I really do promise you
Will burn the flavour of our soup
Because I am in love with you

DAMO x
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Romios Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 4:27 PM
This is wonderfully sweet! Panagiota xxx
Perrin Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 7:27 AM
And you told me you’re not a poet! This is fabulous Damian :-) x
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October 20, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Thank you so much Damo! You’re too kind and have such a beautiful soul. Yes I have read some of her work and I love it, she is truly an inspiration. That’s so lovely of you to want to introduce us :-) sending hugs x
Keady Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 4:35 PM
Hi Elaine, your heart and soul just touches me. I love all the word choices in your writes, so for me you are a really true and natural poet!. So much better than me, as it is not just about words but telling the story which you do in spades! I think you have met already in the PS ether.. but just if not, my friend Panagiota is a great poet and I would like to introduce you both as you both inspire me. best wishes DAMO
Romios Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 2:15 PM
A Fave, dear Damien! Your heart is so true and good. The soup is very much like life itself. Some will give you wings, others may ignore you. Take nothing personally. I let the chips fall where they may. Trust me for blatant honesty. Not sure honesty is welcomed here. I just let it all hang out. I starve for an honest soul. Your piem is more than good. Panagiota
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October 17, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Thank you Panagiota my friend!.. as I feel we are true friends. Your positive words always encourage me.. and I thank you for that! You have a gift that you unselfishly share.. not just with me but for many of us who have only dipped just one toe in writing poetry.. for me your input and feedback is so encouraging as it gives me some self belief and makes me want to get better... best wishes DAMO
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