Is This a Recipe For Happy Soup

I am so unsure what to do
Because I don't really know you
But my heart says find a way
As my words are not child's play

There must therefore be time for us to both discover
If we are maybe right for each other
And if I keep adding to the soup
I might just then win you over

But to make sure we always have fun
I will add my humour and then some
And as my heart you have already won
My recipe must be one

That cooks up such a lifelong treat
That we just don't meet and greet
But fall in the soup recipe
To always be as happy
As we can ever be

I will always add some spice
And continue cooking all that's nice
And together we can live life
Forever together to always be
Not just for our love of Poetry 

As nothing I will ever do  
I really do promise you
Will burn the flavour of our soup
Because I am in love with you

DAMO x

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/17/2019 4:27:00 PM
This is wonderfully sweet! Panagiota xxx
Login to Reply
Date: 10/17/2019 7:27:00 AM
And you told me you’re not a poet! This is fabulous Damian :-) x
Login to Reply
Perrin Avatar
Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/20/2019 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Damo! You’re too kind and have such a beautiful soul. Yes I have read some of her work and I love it, she is truly an inspiration. That’s so lovely of you to want to introduce us :-) sending hugs x
Keady Avatar
Damian Keady
Date: 10/17/2019 4:35:00 PM
Hi Elaine, your heart and soul just touches me. I love all the word choices in your writes, so for me you are a really true and natural poet!. So much better than me, as it is not just about words but telling the story which you do in spades! I think you have met already in the PS ether.. but just if not, my friend Panagiota is a great poet and I would like to introduce you both as you both inspire me. best wishes DAMO
Date: 10/15/2019 2:15:00 PM
A Fave, dear Damien! Your heart is so true and good. The soup is very much like life itself. Some will give you wings, others may ignore you. Take nothing personally. I let the chips fall where they may. Trust me for blatant honesty. Not sure honesty is welcomed here. I just let it all hang out. I starve for an honest soul. Your piem is more than good. Panagiota
Login to Reply
Keady Avatar
Damian Keady
Date: 10/17/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota my friend!.. as I feel we are true friends. Your positive words always encourage me.. and I thank you for that! You have a gift that you unselfishly share.. not just with me but for many of us who have only dipped just one toe in writing poetry.. for me your input and feedback is so encouraging as it gives me some self belief and makes me want to get better... best wishes DAMO
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter