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Is This a Recipe For Happy Soup

I am so unsure what to do Because I don't really know you But my heart says find a way As my words are not child's play There must therefore be time for us to both discover If we are maybe right for each other And if I keep adding to the soup I might just then win you over But to make sure we always have fun I will add my humour and then some And as my heart you have already won My recipe must be one That cooks up such a lifelong treat That we just don't meet and greet But fall in the soup recipe To always be as happy As we can ever be I will always add some spice And continue cooking all that's nice And together we can live life Forever together to always be Not just for our love of Poetry As nothing I will ever do I really do promise you Will burn the flavour of our soup Because I am in love with you DAMO x

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/17/2019 4:27:00 PM

This is wonderfully sweet! Panagiota xxx

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/17/2019 7:27:00 AM

And you told me you’re not a poet! This is fabulous Damian :-) x

Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/20/2019 1:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Damo! You’re too kind and have such a beautiful soul. Yes I have read some of her work and I love it, she is truly an inspiration. That’s so lovely of you to want to introduce us :-) sending hugs x

Damian Keady
Date: 10/17/2019 4:35:00 PM

Hi Elaine, your heart and soul just touches me. I love all the word choices in your writes, so for me you are a really true and natural poet!. So much better than me, as it is not just about words but telling the story which you do in spades! I think you have met already in the PS ether.. but just if not, my friend Panagiota is a great poet and I would like to introduce you both as you both inspire me. best wishes DAMO

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/15/2019 2:15:00 PM

A Fave, dear Damien! Your heart is so true and good. The soup is very much like life itself. Some will give you wings, others may ignore you. Take nothing personally. I let the chips fall where they may. Trust me for blatant honesty. Not sure honesty is welcomed here. I just let it all hang out. I starve for an honest soul. Your piem is more than good. Panagiota

Damian Keady
Date: 10/17/2019 4:09:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota my friend!.. as I feel we are true friends. Your positive words always encourage me.. and I thank you for that! You have a gift that you unselfishly share.. not just with me but for many of us who have only dipped just one toe in writing poetry.. for me your input and feedback is so encouraging as it gives me some self belief and makes me want to get better... best wishes DAMO