Is There Something He's Not Telling Me

Is there something he’s not telling me?

His eyes pierce through me
Like a sharp arrow does to the poor springbok
Coming from a hunter’s hand of rage
Behind me I can feel his pierce hurting me
A shivering strike of prickles move down my spine
As I pour a glass of wine upon his request
His request was different...
I turn around and he smiles
Is there something he’s not telling me?

His look, his glance, no, his look cuts
Like a pair of scissor on a stubborn paper
I look into his eyes
He turns and looks away
I look away and he looks into my eyes
I come, he goes
I go and he comes
The man who once loved me, hates me so much?
Is there something he’s not telling me?

When I call he’s busy
But when they call, he’s available
His presence is cold
It makes me feel old
My story couldn’t have been told
Such secrets do not unfold
Otherwise I won’t be as bold
But he’s slowly dying on me
I know that this
I’m not telling him
But he too isn’t telling me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/9/2015 8:17:00 AM
Your poems are beautiful, Very well thought out very well out together. A poet indeed. Keep 'em coming and Welcome.
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Lebogang Monyela
Date: 7/9/2015 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words Milton, you are so courageous!
Date: 7/6/2015 8:13:00 AM
Welcome, welcome! You have entered with a big bang!! This is a compelling piece---what a way to announce your arrival, Lebogang.
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Lebogang Monyela
Date: 7/6/2015 8:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for this Sibanda! I really feel warmly welcomed, and I'm really happy that you like my poem :)
Date: 7/3/2015 6:39:00 PM
Lebogang, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Lebogang Monyela
Date: 7/6/2015 5:42:00 AM
Hi "SKAT", it is such an honor to be surrounded by your greatness and I wouldn't hesitate to be friends with such a great person. I'm so pleased to meet you and I'm so looking forward to hear from you. I'll sure keep in touch. Thanks for a nice welcome! :) *hugs*
Date: 7/3/2015 5:34:00 PM
Lebogang, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Lebogang Monyela
Date: 7/6/2015 5:45:00 AM
Hi Linda, it is my greatest pleasure and I already looove it here! Thank you for a nice welcome. Your new Poet Friend, Lebo :)
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