Is There Any Chocolate Bars Out There Recipes Needed

Is There Any Chocolate Bars Out There – Recipes Needed 

All the planets are just too far
For me to drive there in my car
I therefore can’t go there to explore
To see if they have chocolate bars

But wouldn’t it be so much fun
To Snickers to them up there some 
My deep fried choco bars
Which we agree are not all yours

So, until my Mercury bar makes it way
As the Universal dish of the day
Up there in the Milky Way
We can still enjoy all that Mars goo
As we work, rest and play up there too
Whilst we travel all the way to Neptune
Or even on to Pluto to

Easter eggs though is my next plan
As I think that I can
Work out where Mars and the Moon
Means I come back to you very soon
After I wash off all the goo
When I have found the coconuts too
For our new Bounty home

So no more Twix or silly tricks, 
I will just give to you chocolate
Whether made in Heaven, or the Milky Way
If you want some just come and stay.

My Premature - Happy Easter Poem - Apologies all!
09/02/2019 
DAMO

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/10/2019 8:29:00 AM
I enjoyed this plus you’ve made me hungry :-) x
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Damian Keady
Date: 10/10/2019 2:43:00 PM
Ahh thanks Elaine... maybe you need some chocolate then.. to be honest I rarely eat the stuff.. but do have an interest in space... as I have always have looked up to the sky at night in awe.. Best wishes to you DAMO x
Date: 9/26/2019 5:16:00 PM
Hello Damian Keady, I love the Milky Way.I like peppermint patty, and many more. Now i am in a chocolate mood. Have anice evening my friend.
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Damian Keady
Date: 9/26/2019 5:23:00 PM
Ahhh thank you so much Darlene... I really appreciate your comment.. all the best to you.. enjoy your evening and chocolate.. Best wishes DAMO X
Date: 8/5/2019 7:26:00 AM
This is delicious fun. A clever and entertaining piece.
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Date: 2/10/2019 1:50:00 PM
Mmm mmm mmm, oh my how did you fit all those chocolate bars into one poem... Tracy
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Damian Keady
Date: 7/17/2019 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Tracy and so sorry I never replied before to your lovely feedback.... how rude of me!.. I have no defence other than I have just been full on working this year and building a business.. so have not logged on for ages... wishing you all the best DAMO x
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