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Is the Empty

When you see me What do you see A man broken by the ravages of trying to be The child crying at a scrapped knee The lover unable to leave one who doesn't love me The manic depressive numbed by life The artist who strives to convey emotion from a muddied paint tray The poet using words to explain away the day and with each syllable give a little of me away so what do you say When you see me What do you see Cause all i see is the empty

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Date: 11/30/2019 2:40:00 AM
"The manic depressive numbed by life The artist who strives to convey emotion from a muddied paint tray" - I am relating to this poem in every way possible now.
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Christopher Quigley
Date: 12/1/2019 1:44:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 11/29/2019 8:22:00 PM
Poignant poem, Christopher.
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Christopher Quigley
Date: 11/29/2019 8:52:00 PM
Thank you

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