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Is That Too Much To Ask

I'm usually quite upbeat in all my poetry So why should this one be any different Going to make an attempt to come down off my cloud And stop pretending everybody loves everybody I'm certainly aware of the ills of the world These constant flareups that have been happening Since the very dawn of civilization As a member of the human race I'm certainly not proud of our record Of constant conflict somewhere in this world of ours They say us guys are very territorial If that's the case, we'll never be able to coexist With people of different colour, language and customs We are bound to clash It's quite natural to have differences But why do these differences have to lead to war Why can't we sit down as civilized people And solve our differences We humans are a combative bunch at the best of times But the average person on the street Doesn't want war, just wants to live life in peace Provide for their family and go about their business All we want is to be happy Is that too much to ask?

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Date: 12/18/2022 12:59:00 AM
lt's really very simple, we need a scientist to eliminate an emotion from future DNA of all man (and woman) kind............ lts a simple little emotion, shouldn't hurt at all if this emotion is removed. But it will help the world be freed... All we have to do is abolish GREED. Greed for money greed for power must be gone... and the world in peace can carry on. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Congrats on a very good poem Jack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/18/2022 4:11:00 AM
To me it's all so simple Wendy! Abolishing greed in all respects will go a long way to a happier world!!! Who am I to have all the answers but us guys are on the right track! Hope you have a very Merry Christmas sweet Wendy! XOXOX
Date: 12/17/2022 9:01:00 PM
I wish more of the world thought like us, Jack! Always a pleasure reading your thoughts. Good to have awareness of what is going around in the world—but I also do admire your positive outlook. Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/18/2022 4:17:00 AM
I try to maintain a positive outlook... it's getting more difficult these days! But we must remain strong! Merry Christmas my sweet lady! Love, Happy Jack XOXOX
Date: 12/17/2022 9:01:00 PM
The average man in the street sure doesn't pine for war --- but I believe that he wants to stop PURE EVIL, as in Putin. Peace through Strength, gw
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/18/2022 4:22:00 AM
That Putin man is pure evil!!! If we took a survey I'm sure 99% want peace Have a Merry Christmas my friend my friend!
Date: 12/17/2022 7:46:00 AM
Oh yeah , you after to show the truth to all now my friend. I have found the only way to be happy and have joy and peace in this life was to give up, I have tried many things that failed miserably but have found it was me fighting against God that caused all these things I was trying to fill that void with. We all need that individual connection with God not influenced with man knowledge,to break this everlasting cycle of God blinding our eyes and closed ears so man knowledge can not comprehend.
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Stephan McBride
Date: 12/17/2022 3:15:00 PM
Amen, Jack that's great you are 87 and doing so well, I know you have seen many changes in this world. I am 44 and have seen it go to the worse rapidly in my time. Just trying to encourage you my friend I am by no means a preacher. Just tell of the things God has done in my life and revealed to me, take care , wish you all the best
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2022 2:16:00 PM
"God is a spirit" this is how I see it! I have always lived my life in a "religious" manner!
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Stephan McBride
Date: 12/17/2022 9:24:00 AM
Yeah I can understand the Religion part I don't seek religion myself to much division in it,. To much human wisdom that separates Christ, when Paul came to people He said I wish you had no foundation in there teaching, before I came to you, because now we got to get past that part first : ). God is spirit so we need to be in His spirit and presence to learn of Him.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2022 8:25:00 AM
Have never been a religious person! I was very influenced by my dad who was also non-religious! However he was 52 when he passed away and I was 18! For many years since my thoughts are at the crossroads! I am now 87...
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Stephan McBride
Date: 12/17/2022 7:51:00 AM
Through Jesus we have been given a way to walk in the spirit if we seek, then His word will bring clarity, joy, peace, and love He has for us to seek Him.
Date: 12/17/2022 7:42:00 AM
the great solution to the one cookie, two children dilemma.....mom said pointing to one "you cut", and to the other "you choose"......
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2022 8:33:00 AM
Very difficult!!! I was the last of 10 girls and spoiled rotten so it was a win-win thingy for me!!! LOL
Date: 12/17/2022 6:44:00 AM
Yes, I agree, the average person wants…so why does hate exist…some are just not good. A merry hug to you. ~ Kim
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2022 6:57:00 AM
There will always be those individuals who are dishonest devious and with evil intentions! A merry hug to you too! XOXOX
Date: 12/17/2022 6:19:00 AM
Words of wisdom Jack, like you say it's been with us since the days of cavemen, I don't think it will ever change. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2022 6:51:00 AM
No... I don't see it ever changing!!! Is the human condition! The choice is not ours! "Since the caveman"...... have a great weekend Sir Thomas!!!

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