Is She the One?

Is she the one who bridled my handsome twilight dream?
Whilst I was inside my woolen blanket of brown and cream
Ah! Like an awesome golden eaglet’s leisure time fly
She began to travel from the serene and bright blue sky
She drove the cloud without engine or steering or wheel 
And reached my vestibule with blossoms of an eternal feel		

Is she the one who tickled my disposition with great fun?
And filled my chamber with the luster of hidden midnight sun
Aha! I felt the alluring musk fragrance of an anonymous deer
I removed my curtains and saw the strewn stars smiling in cheer
She narrated about her wondrous world and the weird myth
Although I made much endeavor to cease my overwhelming mirth

Is she the one who grasped my sturdy and brawny wrist?	
And compelled me to saunter through the way of milky mist
Behold! The gleam and bliss of wingless lonely glowworm
And listen to the laughter and lament of foolish thunderstorm
She gathered a handful drop of new bashful monsoon rain
I watched the sizzling salsa of bathing dusts in utter vain
	
Is she the one who submerged me in this pool of sweet honey?
And I struggled a lot with these white ants in deep agony	
Oops! Like an earsplitting and terrifying trumpet’s roar
I heard my own irksome and foul smelling very last snore
It befell the truth that I fell from my wooden framed bed
Into the valley of wild trees with leaves in enchanting red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/30/2025 11:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/23/2016 11:10:00 PM
NIVAS, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations Niyas on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2010 1:36:00 PM
Congrats Niyas on your winning poem in Tavarus's contest... an amazing poem.. enjoy a special win today... have a safe and happy holiday weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 3:23:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 7/29/2010 9:34:00 AM
hey nice poem bro! Liked reading it. Well i'm a Keralite, but i'm in Pune since my birth.
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Date: 7/27/2010 8:53:00 AM
enjoyed reading this .. welcome to poetry soup, and thanks for your comments. tarek .. uae national =)
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:28:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. Cool Poem
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:49:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Niyas. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2010 8:33:00 PM
A nice entry to the contest. Good luck
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Date: 7/25/2010 11:04:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your most creative write tonight.. with luv..
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Date: 7/25/2010 9:40:00 AM
sweet poem niyas jamal, welcome to the soup new friend, keep that pen going
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Date: 7/25/2010 7:55:00 AM
beautiful imagery. lovely poem, good luck in the contest
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