Is She the One?

Is she the one who bridled my handsome twilight dream?
Whilst I was inside my woolen blanket of brown and cream
Ah! Like an awesome golden eaglet’s leisure time fly
She began to travel from the serene and bright blue sky
She drove the cloud without engine or steering or wheel 
And reached my vestibule with blossoms of an eternal feel		

Is she the one who tickled my disposition with great fun?
And filled my chamber with the luster of hidden midnight sun
Aha! I felt the alluring musk fragrance of an anonymous deer
I removed my curtains and saw the strewn stars smiling in cheer
She narrated about her wondrous world and the weird myth
Although I made much endeavor to cease my overwhelming mirth

Is she the one who grasped my sturdy and brawny wrist?	
And compelled me to saunter through the way of milky mist
Behold! The gleam and bliss of wingless lonely glowworm
And listen to the laughter and lament of foolish thunderstorm
She gathered a handful drop of new bashful monsoon rain
I watched the sizzling salsa of bathing dusts in utter vain
	
Is she the one who submerged me in this pool of sweet honey?
And I struggled a lot with these white ants in deep agony	
Oops! Like an earsplitting and terrifying trumpet’s roar
I heard my own irksome and foul smelling very last snore
It befell the truth that I fell from my wooden framed bed
Into the valley of wild trees with leaves in enchanting red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 11:47 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 23, 2016 at 11:10 PM
NIVAS, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations Niyas on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 1:36 PM
Congrats Niyas on your winning poem in Tavarus's contest... an amazing poem.. enjoy a special win today... have a safe and happy holiday weekend..with luv..
Vermaak Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 3:23 AM
I really enjoyed your poem.
Panicker Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 9:34 AM
hey nice poem bro! Liked reading it. Well i'm a Keralite, but i'm in Pune since my birth.
Al Sabouni Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 8:53 AM
enjoyed reading this .. welcome to poetry soup, and thanks for your comments. tarek .. uae national =)
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 4:28 PM
Welcome to the soup. Cool Poem
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 4:49 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Niyas. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 8:33 PM
A nice entry to the contest. Good luck
Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 11:04 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your most creative write tonight.. with luv..
Insane Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 9:40 AM
sweet poem niyas jamal, welcome to the soup new friend, keep that pen going
Roberts Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 7:55 AM
beautiful imagery. lovely poem, good luck in the contest
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