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Is Love a Choice,Or a Mercy

Is Love A Choice,Or A Mercy? Love unbosomed Sweet joys seamless Does 'Reality'frown? Torments over, We are our answers Do we not have a choice?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2013 4:57:00 PM

good questions. I think you are new? I will go see another poem of yours.

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/28/2013 11:51:00 PM

thanks Andrea....glad you liked it....

Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/15/2013 8:30:00 PM

This is a good question. In my opinion it is both. Good poem - JH

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/28/2013 11:52:00 PM

thank you for the visit...

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/12/2013 2:12:00 PM

powerful poetry this is...excellent...

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/28/2013 11:53:00 PM

thank you....

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/12/2013 7:22:00 AM

Well questioned Mehnaz! The idea of love as a Mercy appeals to me - love embodies kindness and forgiveness - it is a balm to those broken. Very well written!

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/28/2013 11:53:00 PM

thank you Vicky....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/11/2013 5:13:00 PM

I am so pleased to see you try out my Questionku. Great job, the last line should be six sylables. suggestion: First stanza remove "why" from line 3. Stanza 2 perhaps try " do we not have a Choice?" This is one of the best 1st attempts I have seen for this new form, you are a natural.

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/12/2013 2:45:00 AM

I have modified this questionku according to your suggestions...thanks for your suggestions and approval...Mehnaz

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/11/2013 3:34:00 PM

I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love

Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/11/2013 4:45:00 PM

Thank you Debbie for stopping by