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Is Love a Choice,Or a Mercy

Is Love A Choice,Or A Mercy?

Love unbosomed
Sweet joys seamless
Does 'Reality'frown?

Torments over,
We are our answers
Do we not have a choice?

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Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2013 at 4:57 PM

good questions. I think you are new? I will go see another poem of yours.

Mehnaz Veetil

January 28, 2013 at 11:51 PM

thanks Andrea....glad you liked it....

Honestly J.T.

January 15, 2013 at 8:30 PM

This is a good question. In my opinion it is both. Good poem - JH

Mehnaz Veetil

January 28, 2013 at 11:52 PM

thank you for the visit...

Harry Horsman

January 12, 2013 at 2:12 PM

powerful poetry this is...excellent...

Mehnaz Veetil

January 28, 2013 at 11:53 PM

thank you....

Vicky Tsiluma

January 12, 2013 at 7:22 AM

Well questioned Mehnaz! The idea of love as a Mercy appeals to me - love embodies kindness and forgiveness - it is a balm to those broken. Very well written!

Mehnaz Veetil

January 28, 2013 at 11:53 PM

thank you Vicky....

Richard Lamoureux

January 11, 2013 at 5:13 PM

I am so pleased to see you try out my Questionku. Great job, the last line should be six sylables. suggestion: First stanza remove "why" from line 3. Stanza 2 perhaps try " do we not have a Choice?" This is one of the best 1st attempts I have seen for this new form, you are a natural.

Mehnaz Veetil

January 12, 2013 at 2:45 AM

I have modified this questionku according to your suggestions...thanks for your suggestions and approval...Mehnaz