Is Jesus In a Box

Is Jesus in a Box
Mr Elephant walked to his wife, an elephant called Ellie
“You have a good memory” said Mr Elephant 
“Do you think that you can help me”?
Ellie waved her trunk and asked, “What is it husband of mine,
 If I can help, you know I will”
 "It’s this darn question here, I don’t know the answer still”.

“Is Jesus in a box? What kind of question is that?
“I was taught he went to his father in heaven, he died for people, and that’s that”.
Ellie said “I remember from my elephant relatives, they passed it down trunk to trunk
But people have a habit these days, of making it all sound junk.”

“Jesus I believe to earth he was sent, by his heavenly God and father
Because the serpent had persuaded Eve to take her free will a little bit further.
To take a bite of the fruit of the tree, of the knowledge of good and bad
Eve then offered some for Adam to bite, so he was just as sad.”
.
“The knowledge they gained turned them both from God
 They thought that they now knew better.” 
So from the Garden of Eden he cast them out,
And put it in a bible letter.

Adam and Eve went from bad to worse their sons were awful to each other
And from them both their children learned, some even to hate their brother.
God was now not happy with his grandiose plan,
he asked his son if his life would give, to save this earthling man.

Jesus looked at his father; he had the best one that he knew
“Of course my god and father, I will do this thing for you”
As a reward his father said “When you have completed this terrible thing
I will bring you back to heaven and make you a heavenly King.”
Mr Elephant looked at his wife, her trunks as beautiful as golden locks
“Of course dear Ellie I knew you would know, Jesus can’t be in a box.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Esquire Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I see Tony Lane had an effect on YOU with his Elephant collection. I don't mean to scare YOU but this is written as intracately as a SPIDER weaves its web If only the human race had such great Memory.Superb I wanted to have Tea with YOU but I think I'm too late maybe tomorrow LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
Horsman Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 9:09 AM
Wow Mandy this is so complex, i'll keep it simple, i would dearly love to answer that Question one day...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 4:22 AM
Thankyou BB I always enjoy and like to listen and learn from your comments x
Butterfly Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 4:12 AM
I think this a wonderful way to enter the contest asking the question and answering it. I think elephants are amazing creatures. I just watched a movie called Water For Elephants. The elephant in the story is just so endorable and you cannot help but love her. I have a few elephant figurines for good luck.
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 9:03 PM
Mandy, this was quite interesting. Also, it reminded me of a poetry contest we had a long time ago on elephants! I really enjoyed reading this.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:02 AM
Thanks I thought it was astrange question and decideded to answer it in as fun a way as I could think.x
Lane Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 6:08 AM
I have a large collection of elepahnts. I'm going to have to start consulting with them.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 6:47 AM
Well you know an elephant never forgets so you can't go wrong if you ask one.x
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