Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

is it too late?

years have taken their toll
that's how we roll
we do our very best
and let go of the rest

we watch our life go by
and try our best not to cry
the world is in bad shape
all choking on a sour grape



AP: 2nd place 2025

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David Crandall August 31, 2025 at 6:26 PM good - "we do our best and let go of the rest" - that's all we can do! Line Gauthier September 1, 2025 at 5:16 AM Very true ~ thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, David ~

sara Etgen-Baker August 31, 2025 at 5:11 PM some days, I, too, feel like a sour grape. Well said! Line Gauthier September 1, 2025 at 5:16 AM lol ~ hope you feel great today, Sara ~

Paula Goldsmith August 31, 2025 at 12:20 PM I enjoyed reading your powerful write. I see 2nd place??? Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day writing away............ Line Gauthier August 31, 2025 at 1:13 PM Thanks, this PS site is my main repository for all my poetry so I post a few extra associated details.