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Is It Love

We just walk along The sandy shore at the beach I am so thrilled and the happiest As it is the first time She accompanies and appear with me Nothing we speak Silence , silence absolute silence Between us We took part in the play of kids Watched eagerly the sand castles And its creators Became kids whenever the tide comes Still we speak nothing But just at a look we shared Thousand words Just at a touch I enter in A magical world of dreams Is it love I do not know But I wish her presence always.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/13/2012 10:53:00 PM
How hauntingly lovely..I can feel the whole scene..the beach and everything..
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 10/13/2012 11:51:00 PM
thank you JL
Date: 7/13/2012 9:00:00 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Jay. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/13/2012 9:15:00 AM
thank you .jk
Date: 7/7/2012 8:56:00 AM
How cute! Nice one.
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/13/2012 9:15:00 AM
thank you .jk
Date: 7/2/2012 12:47:00 AM
of course it's love...a magical feeling jay!!! cute and nice wrk...
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/13/2012 9:15:00 AM
thank you .jk
Date: 6/21/2012 8:50:00 AM
Yea I think it, too but just wish their presence stay at least <3
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/21/2012 9:23:00 AM
thanks .all my love poems are only dreams and imaginations .i do not know what is love .i am a lonely man .till now never i get a chance to love or to be loved .i create my own world and dreams .jk
Date: 6/21/2012 6:40:00 AM
aww thats a romantic poem verry lovley, thanks for your kind comments on my poems, I love reading my bible too, I am not God but I believe God lives in me and his Love flows out of my being, and I like tot ey to bless people and just kep loving and keep caring, so much, we can neevr love too much, aww thanks for all your kind words you area blessing to me erhe on poetry soup and you must be a angel for sure, God bless you from diane
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/21/2012 7:27:00 AM
thanks.jk
Date: 6/21/2012 5:04:00 AM
It is an amazing feeling when u r in love.U wil definitely know it.Very sweet poem
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/21/2012 5:06:00 AM
thanks .jk

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