Is It Confusion

He called me Remxy,
Actually that's his previous one,
I know he was furtive,
about his cold feelings towards me,
he felt completely nothing for me,
yet ! he lied,
should I hold on?

it is something that seems
like an intractable problem,
he does not seem to realise,
that I am here fir him,
He only sees her shadow hovering,
in his dreams.

it seems I was a substitute,
more so,
I was just an impersonator,
because even after I left ,
he never seemed to bother to call,
he never realised that he had lost an unfound species,
the unique species,
he never felt he had smashed a beautiful Spanish guitar,
it was a lesson learnt the hard way for me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 7:38 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Dindi Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 10:32 AM
Beautiful piece, true emotional expression.
A   Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 3:59 PM
STELLAH AYAKO, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Stellah,, a pleasure to read your poem. Have a great day. SKAT ,
Merritt Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 8:48 AM
I love the flavor of your metaphor here, Stellah. A great expression !
Yaseen Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 2:39 AM
nicely written.. thumbs up
Ayako Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 4:24 AM
Thanks
Ayako Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 1:35 AM
Greetings from Kenya too
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