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Is It Confusion

He called me Remxy, Actually that's his previous one, I know he was furtive, about his cold feelings towards me, he felt completely nothing for me, yet ! he lied, should I hold on? it is something that seems like an intractable problem, he does not seem to realise, that I am here fir him, He only sees her shadow hovering, in his dreams. it seems I was a substitute, more so, I was just an impersonator, because even after I left , he never seemed to bother to call, he never realised that he had lost an unfound species, the unique species, he never felt he had smashed a beautiful Spanish guitar, it was a lesson learnt the hard way for me.

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Date: 3/18/2017 10:32:00 AM
Beautiful piece, true emotional expression.
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Date: 2/24/2016 3:59:00 PM
STELLAH AYAKO, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 7:45:00 PM
Stellah,, a pleasure to read your poem. Have a great day. SKAT ,
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Date: 9/11/2014 8:48:00 AM
I love the flavor of your metaphor here, Stellah. A great expression !
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Date: 9/10/2014 2:39:00 AM
nicely written.. thumbs up
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Stellah Ayako
Date: 9/10/2014 4:24:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 3/7/2014 1:35:00 AM
Greetings from Kenya too
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