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Is god watching

Is god watching this film of mine? The movie I’m in right now. With pistachio nuts, a glass of wine, rooting for me somehow? Does he grimace at the screen or cry when I’m feeling down? Does he see where I’ve been, laugh when I’m acting the clown? Does he see my mistakes, take in the circumstances which contribute to an act considered a sin, to then overrule it as an attribute? Does he know me as a person and that I have my many faults? Does empathy exist within the deity where perfection is the default? Or are we all god, one who plays so many parts, to then re-enact each upon the screen? If so there are billions of films to see, surely enough to last eternity.

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Date: 9/2/2019 9:10:00 PM
Intriguing and thought-provoking write, RT---not to mention entertaining. Best wishes, Gershon
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 9/3/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. 'Thought provoking' is a great comment and much appreciated. Hope all is well...RT
Date: 8/31/2019 4:21:00 PM
It is a great comfort to know we are being watched over as our lives unfold. Lovely poem my friend. Have a great day.
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 8/31/2019 4:24:00 PM
Your comment is most appreciated. God bless. Ron xx