Sand Blown Poet Free verse

Is Awareness Limited

i remember,
therefore i have come to pass
what is't but retention

something other than the now
to be again forgotten,
and called to mind
once more

that, something of descartes
might prevail
and, by removing itself
be as truth unseen

a first and last,
where-in there is nothing
but the polar opposite,
"i think (therefore).....i am...

therefore i think
i am..."
future-past,
thoughts of a now

but that is naught,
as unspoken truth be
what lies neath,
and unquestioned

sought,
with one eye
to the horizon,
a depth

of mind,
no token,
"i think...
therefore....peace"

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Stephe Watson August 3, 2018 at 5:04 PM To end at peace leaves me trusting that you ended in and not merely with peace. You are (writing), therefore I (am left to) think. Sand Blown August 3, 2018 at 5:21 PM yes...(perhaps to prevent a shut-down) the adjustment was not immediate but all consuming

Gary Bateman July 29, 2018 at 10:09 AM Sand Blown, A very interesting write with some similar but different perspectives. A good read. I like it. Cheers, Gary Sand Blown August 2, 2018 at 6:08 PM that's what i like a philosophy...it's applicable...

Sylvia Coulstock July 19, 2018 at 6:49 PM This is a very intellectual and philosophical write and I enjoyed it,thank you.It is nice to read something a little different that breaks away from the norm. Sand Blown August 2, 2018 at 6:07 PM thanks...one of the first tasks i learned was how to dig a hole : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 17, 2018 at 8:43 PM I like it :) xomo Sand Blown August 2, 2018 at 6:06 PM thanks man