Is Anybody There?

Bewildered and forgotten
No one seems to care
Alone I sit while asking
Is anybody there?

Growing old was not my fault
Nor was it in my plans
I followed the path life gave me
Just like time demands

Discarded like a memory
That's no longer of any use
Rejected and neglected
My age is no excuse

No one comes to visit me
It's like I don't exist
They think I can't remember
So, I am just dismissed

Solitary confinement
What am I being punished for?
You tell me that you love me
Yet deserving of so much more

No one to tell my troubles to
Or to talk about the past
A prisoner of my loneliness
How much longer can it last?

Banned from all existence
By the wrinkles on my face
One day soon, you'll feel my pain
For you will take my place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 4:06 PM
Congratulations..Sara
Peranteau Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 10:36 AM
Jeeeeepers...I'd better make some more friends fer I get to old...who's gonna change my diapers ! *smiles*...great write dear poet, a great entry, and congratulations ! much love, james
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Larry. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 4:39 AM
Congrats Larry on your poem being selected in the first round of P.S. contest competition.. good luck in the next phase luv..
Gorelick Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 11:47 PM
This one speaks to me..Im so glad it was recognized and made it through the first round. Be proud! BG
Roberts Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 9:47 AM
this was a wonderful entry Larry and I am so pleased it made the first cut in the Poetry Soup contest
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October 21, 2010 at 7:44 AM
Larry, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
Brahma Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 5:32 AM
glad to have read your poem.
Jones Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 12:21 PM
This was very poignant in my opinion. Thank you.
Brown Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Larry. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 5:53 PM
fantastic poem Larry , congrats on having it featured this week
Hilliker Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 5:15 PM
A sad but powerful and honest poem, Larry. I feel your pain and sense your heart breaking. God bless you.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Congrats Larry on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all this happy Sunday with luv....
Brown Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 5:06 AM
You tell them Larry !!!! ~~~Magnificent~~~piece. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 7:39 PM
Very sad but true. Its shameful. Very thought provoking.
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 1:33 PM
This should not be...Age should be honored..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Foulk Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Friend i feel your pain. I'm 66 will be 67 in July. but who is to say that in a few years what will happen. this was a great poem. many years ago i was young as we all were. I never thought I would get old, but we all do. Young people has to have more respect for older people, because some day they will be old. Take care.
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