I's and Eyes

I’s and Eyes
As my child would reach the age of four
the english language was a funny chore
He never used the pronoun I
His Me want, Me like made me sigh
And then one day I called him to me
and spoke to him with sincerity
To emphasize, my finger pressed his chest
To choose the words that I thought best
Billy, my kid, don’t say me, say I
Curious he looked down below and said
But that’s my button, not my eye!

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October 17, 2015
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Cresswell Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Kids still say the darnedest things. I love their logic so straight forward. Hard for us as adults to understand. We have complicated things so much. Enjoyed immensely.
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 12:08 PM
hahahahahahaha...lol...loved this :) 7..love and peace
Sirak Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 8:48 AM
I love this one! The English language can be a horror to master.
Austin Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 10:28 AM
I think you have a warm, wonderful "eye" for your child. Thanks for the visit. Love, daver
Sergi Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Thanks Daver: It really happened with my daughter.
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 7:56 PM
hahaha. I enjoyed this cute piece!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 2:32 AM
Kids are so innocent and literal. They say the cutest things. I read your poem leaving me with a big smile.
Sergi Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Hi Connie This actually happened with my daughter.
Tor Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Cute and clever Ralph.
Fisher Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 2:39 PM
That's a fun poem, Ralph. I like the fifth line the best. Can relate to the whole story.
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