Irretrievable Love
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"You will forget me, the love we once shared
Has vanished in the attempt at disguise
The dreams we once knew cannot be repaired
It's gone with the light that once lit your eyes"
Has vanished in the attempt at disguise.
Ah cruel love, how I still yearn for thee.
It's gone with the light that once lit your eyes,
Now I feel so blind, yet I grieve to see.
Ah cruel love, how I still yearn for thee.
Wretched days are no longer worth living.
Now I feel so blind, yet I grieve to see.
Can I try for once and be forgiving?
Wretched days are no longer worth living.
The dreams we once knew cannot be repaired.
Can I try for once and be forgiving?
You will forget me, the love we once shared.
27 April 2021
10 syllables per line checked by HMS.com
Form Pantoum
STANZA 5
Placed 1
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Sponsored by: Joseph May
Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2021
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