Irrepresible Nature

Another day ends with insipid sun
One more uncertain season
Another month ebbs slowly invariably gone
One more uninteresting month another reason

Each bulb impressively pushing old soil up
So absented from every winter irritation 
The orchestrated plants unite drinking along nature’s everlasting cup,
Invigorated refreshed, outdoor rains unbidden now and so equip spring’s irrigations

Now offering beautiful uniformity, colours ablaze ferociously
Ever changing illusions painting over the untamed soil
All struggling evermore to imitate natures ordered ways 
Unbeatable colours abound, Mother Earth delights in toil 

Overlong tall upright grasses allow seeds easy dispersal
Insects dancing on flowers undulating formations.
Accustomed we ever become inclined to ogle things universal
Nature abounds with ever more interesting luscious opulent flirtations 

Untold species all working ever closer in harmonious obligation 
So unlocking faces all smiling even now in sunbathed oblations still unseen
Yet authenticating spring, escaping winter in fulfilling overall nature’s unification.
© ~GG~ 22/03/2013
Competition Entry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/20/2013 9:52:00 PM
Hi Mandy, , congrats on your winning poem *** Always & Forever ***LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2013 4:00:00 PM
awesome....win.....SKAT
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Date: 9/16/2013 9:29:00 AM
What an amazing piece, and considering the difficult challenge of con/vow sequence, one would think it came so easily to your pen. It flows beautifully !
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Date: 9/16/2013 5:54:00 AM
congrats Mandy, this deservingly where it should be... amazing poetry...
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:12:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Mandy
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Date: 4/8/2013 10:44:00 PM
hi my dearest golden angel Mandy... how are you,,,missing you much <3 just stopping to enjoy your fabulous write and would you mind to let me have your site ...so i can enjoy much more every talented penned of yours... our sweet Vie told me your site but i can not fiind it, could you please let me know how to reach the link? thank you so very much my sweetheart angel <3 luv and hugs <3 Sk
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Date: 4/5/2013 7:36:00 PM
Powerful wordage Mandy, well splayed I have to say. Loved it's images but if I may say in your third Stanza you bring your bloom to Toil. I would so love this to be Royal to insist that Mother Natures through your lovely words continues to bloom. If I have read this wrongly, then detention is my Must. Have a lovely weekend :) xx
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Date: 3/22/2013 7:16:00 AM
Wow Mandy that is awesome...and I had to use a dictionary. Only you can make words like that flow into music.....Donna
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/22/2013 9:12:00 AM
bless you for that Donna xx
Date: 3/22/2013 3:00:00 AM
Now that is poetry, and wow i just love this.....
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Harry Horsman
Date: 3/22/2013 11:19:00 AM
dare you to take me home, i could be your pillow, and i'm all soft and warm..
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/22/2013 3:09:00 AM
can I take you home with me and keep you on hand for comments please? lol
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/22/2013 3:08:00 AM
ha, bless you harry xx
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