Irreconcilable-Pleiades

irreconcilable

i asked her out, to date
inasmuch to amend
incomprehensible
insults slips  from the past.
it was only coffee,
innocence wrapped branches 
intertwined with olives.

connie pachecho

2/24/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 25, 2017 at 6:27 PM
"innocence wrapped branches intertwined with olives" = sweet! Nicely done, Connie. : )
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