Irony Waters

The corridor to her heart
     Was lined by shelves with dusty books

The walls were adorned with a myriad of portraits
     For whom all had haunting looks

Upon first entering there was ample room
     One could turn around to run
And now it is as though I'm a bullet chambered in a gun

Bleeding through my armor plated chest its clear to me
     There's no such thing as manifest destiny

In the hallway of my life I stand before
     The last door at the end
To petrified to knock, much less let myself in

The open palms of want were turned upside down
      As offerings were thrown upon uneven ground

Isn't it funny how quick things change
      When what we want gets re-arranged 

Sides chosen for their beauty can turn ugly by time
      And the air just gets thinner the higher up that we climb

In a bed of tragedy wicked thoughts are spawned
      As one lover drowns the other in a heart shaped pond

Investigators send samples of the water to a lab to be tested
      Where there is a man in a white coat who has nothing invested

The results are rich in iron and high in agony
       A crown of thorns laced with bitter irony

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/3/2017 6:28:00 AM
deeply written with a win so well deserved, john.. best congrats and huggs
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Date: 1/6/2017 1:50:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 1/3/2017 2:17:00 AM
Wickedly well written. Deep and intelligent. One can feel the tension . Yes, drownin a lover in a heart shaped pond is brilliant.
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Date: 1/6/2017 1:52:00 AM
Thank you, i tried to write it with high tension that culminated into an ending with a sort of lightheartedness
Date: 1/3/2017 12:05:00 AM
Excellent and refreshingly different. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 1/2/2017 6:23:00 PM
A 7 for this moving, thought-provoking, WINNING poem, John. LOVE that line about the heart-shaped pond! Janice
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Date: 1/6/2017 1:54:00 AM
thank you for getting it. A heart-shaped pond seemed like a fitting place to drown a wicked lover
Date: 1/2/2017 5:46:00 PM
Someone getting cold feet? Well done John. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/6/2017 1:56:00 AM
been with my wife for 10 years. Wrote this about tragic endings to marriages that my wife and i have surpassed throughout the years.
Date: 5/19/2016 1:39:00 PM
John, this has lots of deep imagery, I enjoyed. SKAT
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