Irony

I'm I am Ironic. Even more so than, Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia. A middle finger to sanity. I'm I am Life. Or at least the definition of life. Or so I think to myself. As I slowly get irritated, By the roots of all these plants. **Hippopotomonstrosesquppedaliophobia is the fear of long words**

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Amy Swanson

Date: 12/3/2008 12:49:00 PM

Very unique and creative write! I love this, and I even learned a new word! ;) hehe I thought that was very clever. Great writing, look forward to reading more of your work. God bless and thanks :) Amy

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/2/2008 5:08:00 PM

I love this and how the long word was drawn out in the piece. The flow is really nice and the one word on a line is effective. I am digging your style. Thanks for the comments on my work. Chris.

Denis Joe

Date: 12/2/2008 11:58:00 AM

Its great to come across poems such as this (I mean that utilise economy). The layout of the poem works really well and gives a real punch to the words. I imagine that you wanted to use the word 'Hippopotomonstrosesquppedaliophobia' and perhaps saw this as a vehicle. But for me it is the final line that really gives the whole poem that impact

Michaela Payne

Date: 11/30/2008 9:18:00 PM

Awesome write, I loved it, so creative and ironic lol. keep it up! Blessings, ~Michaela~

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/30/2008 8:50:00 PM

AWESOME POEM DUDE!!!!!!!! Keep writing these sweet poems. ^.^ Love Alexz