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Iron Fist

A country ruled with an Iron Fist one that kills anyone who objects A fanatical leader who wants the bomb who blames it's troubles on the West One that kills anyone who objects an innocent student gunned down like a dog Who blames it's troubles on the West an election that was clearly lost An innocent student gunned down like a dog a fanatical leader who wants the bomb An election that was clearly lost a country ruled with an Iron Fist

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/11/2010 6:16:00 AM
Powerful way to convey your message. The repetition works well--something difficult to achieve. Well done! Karen
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Date: 12/31/2009 5:30:00 PM
Good write Richard and good point. It is always blamed on the westuntil if they should happen to finally take it overe as they desird to ... Then it will be blamed on... the ..East?
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Date: 12/30/2009 7:07:00 PM
Sad but so true.. if only things would change in the World then it would trickle down to all of us.. but it has to start with a GOD they do not know or accept... thankxxx for this rendition .. alll your own... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/30/2009 5:38:00 AM
Interesting presentation of the idea of dictatorship. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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