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Iron and Wool

Mill boy, meets pit girl. Wool and Iron. Protection and strength. Complementing. Opposites attracting. The magnetic core pull, unbreakable. The outer, nourishing, nurturing. The perfect balance. A symmetry. Loved and loving. Life shared, family, forever friends, Vows, distant, but stronger. Sons, raised, fledged and flying Dreams realised. New lives, new dreams. Hope undimmed. Love eternal. Forever us.

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Date: 12/11/2023 5:58:00 PM
i like the way you have expressed this with symetrical and asymetrical word combinations - creates a rich and unique impression
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Timothy Kendall
Date: 3/19/2024 12:33:00 AM
Thank you.

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