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Irish Nectar of the Sun Goddess

This mystical aura of golden radiant sunbeams so sublime With a warm mead laying lovely below its enchanted neck, Is breathless releasing gasps of white-hot-fire breaths now, All spiritual within one and a thousand sighs, it whistles too. Brightly your radiance shines through the deep blue oceans Where rainbows are misted with shades inside a desire born, With curtains falling—revealing a beauty spot held precious, Whilst in your heart glows warmly a true love priceless pure. A royal crown bestoweth upon thine mantel of soft ‘n purest silk, Now spangled as dewdrops glisten brightest on mirrored slippers, As a divine swan upon one wave began dancing on joyous ripples, An old Irish jig played on in this moment dancing you and I, as two. The Merry Old Leprechaun looked on with his wee-soft eye twinkle As the Sun Goddess giveth her divine breath to this sacred harvest; Now to beareth the sweetest of fruit with warmest rays of gentleness, So all can shareth this grandest garden moment of holy eternal glory. We all shall now, forever and ever, prosper in this heavenly abundance Whilst we sheddeth a most wee-curious light into this eternal paradise, As you and I, and the Merry Old Leprechaun shareth a passion so true, We drinketh gladly the sweet ‘n stout Irish Nectar of the Sun Goddess! Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem Copyright © All Rights Reserved (January 17, 2017) (Quatrain)

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Date: 2/17/2017 12:58:00 AM
Congratulations to one of the best collaborators of poetry soup! Both of you are immensely talented ! ''Whilst we sheddeth a most wee-curious light into this eternal paradise,..my fav line..A7 for this marvelous write !
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Date: 1/18/2017 11:21:00 AM
Liam Mate!! What can I say here?? I guess, I'm obviously biased. A great co-authored effort -- absolutely!! I truly enjoyed having the opportunity for both of us, one-on-one, to work together again. Having a big glass of "Irish" presently, is a great way, to celebrate this poem and a most wonderful write!! Definitely a pleasure to work with you again, my dear friend!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 1/18/2017 4:50:00 AM
- Dorian has used up all the beautiful words :))) - .... a wonderful poem, my friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/17/2017 6:31:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Gary!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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