Iridescent Ripples

ducks hear the splashing feet of a young girl that sends rings of iridescent ripples across the placid surface of the pond signaling them to gather for free food
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Sambourne Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Greetings Emile What a superb image of a little girl delighting ducks. Wonderful piece. Loved it. Best wishes, Brian
Pinet Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:20 PM
Thanks Brian, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Thank you so much for participating in the contest, Emile, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 11:35 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Ermine Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 5:19 AM
Spot on! It couldn't be better than the way you put it here, Emile. So good, under these tight guidelines.
Pinet Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Thanks Sigrid, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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