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Tetractys 
Invented by Ray Stebbing, it is a 5 line poem with the 1st line having one syllable, the 2nd line two syllables, the 3rd line three syllables, the 4th line four syllables and the 5th line 10 syllables (1,2,3,4, 10) You may also(10,4,3,2,1) or a double Tetractys (1,2,3,4,10, 10,4,3,2,1) 

ducks heed the splashing feet of a young girl that sends rings of iridescent ripples across the placid surface of the pond signaling them to gather for free food (Double Tetractys) 08/11/2020 Double Tetractys Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper... Photo #1

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Date: 8/27/2020 1:15:00 PM
Greetings Emile What a superb image of a little girl delighting ducks. Wonderful piece. Loved it. Best wishes, Brian
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/27/2020 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Brian, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for participating in the contest, Emile, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/27/2020 11:35:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/12/2020 5:19:00 AM
Spot on! It couldn't be better than the way you put it here, Emile. So good, under these tight guidelines.
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Date: 8/12/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Sigrid, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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