Sara Kendrick Poet Choka

Iridescent Raindrop

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                                        Iridescent rain
                                  Only drop created by
                                  Sunbeam on new rain

                                        Iridescent tear
                              One tear created by words
                                   Hateful hurting words

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Audonus Taylor November 13, 2010 at 4:06 AM I am falling in love with your talent. I click, and Boom, another masterpiece! WOW

Margeret Bailey November 6, 2010 at 7:37 PM I enjoyed reading this poem. It is very appropriate. Thanks.

Duncan Chappell October 29, 2010 at 1:28 AM oh thank you for sharing this with us sara duncan

Gert W. Knop October 24, 2010 at 8:41 AM great imagery and so well penned, Sara! Thank you for commenting "Early Snow". Last year we had a long winter and it seems that we will have another one this year. It is nice to walk in the snow if there is a blue sky!!! Have a nce week!...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 21, 2010 at 8:59 AM Yes that rain seems to be falling today too and your lines are vivid and beautiful Sara.. your blog was most encouraging today .. keep the faith strong and positive forward..luv.. all will be well in God's time my friend..

Wilma Neels October 21, 2010 at 7:21 AM Those are the words we remember forever.. Beautiful write Sara, says such a lot ~ thank you for your comments always Wilma

Suresh Iyer October 21, 2010 at 4:32 AM fine expressions of words

James Peranteau October 20, 2010 at 4:55 PM Sad to think what a few words can do to a kind heart. Great balance here Sara...great poem ! much love, james

Michael J. Falotico October 20, 2010 at 4:32 PM Beautiful images and write my dear poet friend..love Michael

Doris Culverhouse October 20, 2010 at 2:03 PM good comparison... we have church tonight!

Dr.Ram Mehta October 20, 2010 at 12:05 PM Enjoyed the fine write with good images, sara

Tobey Hill October 20, 2010 at 8:27 AM enjoyed this write Sara....TAH