Ion I

An effervescent ever-pheasant's odyssey really ought to see my grain's migraine and Lem 'n Ma rang pie Of course, no bull's noble as Maple's may pull and gopher's go-fer dozen 't batten I Camel-flesh is camouflaged yet a manatee's not a man 'o tea though a miss is a miss a baby is a bay bee Enclosing in closing, Ion I must say (that) while bee gone is begone (still) Hi and high need hie but a by is a buy is a bye

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/3/2018 1:37:00 AM

You're brilliant wit amazes me Gershon! I could never come up with anything this clever! Bravo! : )

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/3/2018 8:41:00 PM

Ion I are (?) blushing... Sometimes these phrases just come out of nowhere, you know? But those times are exceedingly rare. As they say, 99% perspiration. With me, it's probably 99.9% … And how about your enchanting poems. I certainly can't come up with the kind of seamless eloquence that seems to roll of your pen... Thanks for the support, Connie. Best wishes, Gershon

Chris Green

Date: 11/2/2018 4:14:00 PM

Very clever and creative my friend. Your word play is amazing. This sure seems like it was fun to write

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2018 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Chris. It was fun--when it was done. Otherwise, mostly work, as usual... Oh, well. Sometimes, I wish I could just "splash a bucket of paint on a canvass, like they used to do back in the '60's...Then when I really think about that, there's no satisfaction there at all... ~ Gershon