Ion I

An effervescent ever-pheasant's
   odyssey really ought to see
   my grain's migraine
      and Lem 'n Ma rang pie

Of course, no bull's noble
   as Maple's may pull
   and gopher's go-fer
     dozen 't batten I

Camel-flesh is camouflaged
   yet a manatee's not a man 'o tea
   though a miss is a miss
      a baby is a bay bee

Enclosing in closing, Ion I must say
   (that) while bee gone is begone
   (still) Hi and high need hie
      but a by is a buy is a bye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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November 3, 2018 at 1:37 AM
You're brilliant wit amazes me Gershon! I could never come up with anything this clever! Bravo! : )
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November 3, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Ion I are (?) blushing... Sometimes these phrases just come out of nowhere, you know? But those times are exceedingly rare. As they say, 99% perspiration. With me, it's probably 99.9% … And how about your enchanting poems. I certainly can't come up with the kind of seamless eloquence that seems to roll of your pen... Thanks for the support, Connie. Best wishes, Gershon
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November 2, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Very clever and creative my friend. Your word play is amazing. This sure seems like it was fun to write
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November 2, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Thank you, Chris. It was fun--when it was done. Otherwise, mostly work, as usual... Oh, well. Sometimes, I wish I could just "splash a bucket of paint on a canvass, like they used to do back in the '60's...Then when I really think about that, there's no satisfaction there at all... ~ Gershon
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