Iomindia

IOMINDIA Neither above or below this world She swirls in the microscopic-pointillist Dream of all Saints all demons since the fig leaf in contemplation the eyes go static spirit wends along some light-tunnel a golden door at its end “Knock and ye shall enter” Knock!

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/9/2011 11:54:00 PM

Wild visions to contemplate, I will knock and hope to enter!

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/17/2011 6:52:00 AM

Enjoyed your write Daver, i shall return to this again no doubt!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2011 1:58:00 PM

ooo, a bit gripping.. waiting to open,, have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY tomorrow... celebrate with smiles ... take care..P.D.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2011 1:28:00 PM

That is really interesting point of view...Enjoyed reading...Yes, God can work miracles but it also takes the person wanting to change and working at it..Sometimes that is not so easy..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/6/2011 3:00:00 PM

A lovely write, Daver! Love the imagery and the messages they envoke. Have a great weekend and keep up with these amazing writes! Love, Mikki

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 3:55:00 PM

Of course the title drew my attention, Daver, as your other poem by this name was the first long piece of yours I read. I love the way you describe the transition from one world to the other. I'm knocking. Please let me in. Love, Carolyn

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/5/2011 8:02:00 AM

* rap tap tap * is anyone there? * “Smile” * again as but merely a moment ago * i find a voice walking amid the passages of * an enchanting place within times pages * and i love the message i find upon the other side * at the end of that lights strewn tunnel * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/5/2011 6:35:00 AM

What a beautiful morning I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this morning Daver. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2011 6:17:00 AM

daver! .. it's been a while.. love the suspense and mystery here; well-sctibed! :) huggs, nette