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Inward Seasons

Memories like a Chinese dragon fluid~~~multihued~~~rattling. I wrestle my brain, p i i t n n d i o n w g n until I find the origin of its negative thought. A hall of mirrors w a n r n e i d b n u k l l o e u d s scuttling toward Winter’s age. Underscore of pinings thought to be important …….and they are……. sculpted scores of Octoberfest. I Spring’s zephyr s ) ( ) w ) ( o i ) ( n n ) ( ) g ) ====== releasing endorphins from my carefree childhood. Warmth under my mother’s coddles, my shell well cared for, ! ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ************* as I care for her now, as her casing fills with chemo drips. I ponder the seasons of life, snaking inwards ~ ~ ~ ~ peck at the visceral shell. Summerhouse warmth, waterborne-eyes closed in hibernaculum-chrysalis. 0 0 0 0 I shall not ponder my death! Nor shall I write a sonnetbituary. 10/26/2020 Inward Reflections Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Cooke

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Date: 10/29/2020 4:16:00 AM
This is completely compelling, captivating, and challengingly creative, my friend. Wow! I am blown over by it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:36:00 AM
Giving you a hug! Thank you!
Date: 10/26/2020 1:59:00 PM
Such clever and thought-provoking sculpting of poetic feelings, Kim. This must have taken hours to get just write. I liked your word 'sonnetbituary'. Blessings, my friend ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2020 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, John! Blessings to you!
Date: 10/26/2020 11:18:00 AM
There are a few who would write their obituaries. Don't interest me. When I'm gone I wont be able to read it. You had a job with your shape. Quite interesting. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2020 6:27:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 10/26/2020 9:59:00 AM
Memories of the past and the love and worrying of your mom. Interesting form and write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2020 6:30:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! Thanks too for mentioning my mom. <3

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