Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Quintain (English)

Involved To Evolve

  "Involved to Evolve"


shattered emotions swallowed your heart and invaded my peaceful space
another romantic escapade eclipsed and then turned sour
deciding to "crash and burn" disrupting family home place
wallowing in quicksand as crumbled dreams did cower
allowing your foundation to tumble destroying your ivory tower.

patience and understanding offered to solve swift conclusions
sharing experience of wounds and scars with loving support
your "perfect fit" will soon appear evaporating illusions
maturity in choice, my son, will clarify portrait distort
dark veil of pain will disappear as paper mache' women you abort.


*For Cyndi's You Do Understand Contest...
*TWO QUINTAINS
*Written for my son, Christopher, and his many romantic 
 love affairs which involve us always.  

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Skat A March 13, 2014 at 2:09 AM amazing poem... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Debbie Guzzi August 2, 2012 at 6:31 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joyce Johnson August 2, 2012 at 5:23 PM Oh, do I ever understand this one. I have had my heart broken many times for my children and grandchildren. Congraulations on your win. So worthy. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 2, 2012 at 5:52 AM WON 7th place.. thankxxx...

Carol Sunshine Brown August 2, 2012 at 5:34 AM Congratulations on your 7th place win in Cyndi's 'You Do Understand" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 1, 2012 at 11:51 PM Hello my bff,, congratulations with your wonderful win in Cyndi's contest... xox~PD

Jack Horne July 24, 2012 at 1:30 PM heartfelt write, Linda-Marie - but he'll meet Miss Right soon: ) Lovely entry for the contest, my friend

James Peranteau July 24, 2012 at 1:21 AM My mind went sunder here dear poet with your write. And with good reason dear friend. First, your wonderful way with words, and then, the wonderful view I get of a parent who cares so much for their child, that in poesy the love flares ! And advise......Church, work; the gym ! *smiles*. The strength of the Spirit, the strength of the dollar; the strength of the body! Have a wonderful week Linda-Marie ! Much love to you and yours, james

Jancarl Campi July 23, 2012 at 10:19 AM Hi Linda, hope you do well in the contest. Take care and please be careful, Jancarl

Ravi Sathasivam July 23, 2012 at 12:34 AM Lovely poem. Well expressed. Well done. Tfs

Phyllis Babcock July 23, 2012 at 12:01 AM Great write for the contest and yes son's seem to involve us in their romantic affairs. BUT on the other hand we look out for our children and they do come to us for advice. NICELY DONE. love phyl

Joann Grisetti July 22, 2012 at 7:43 PM Great advice written in poetic brilliance. All mothers and sons shoiulod heed your advice.

The Situation July 22, 2012 at 6:47 PM i took my mother out for dinner today. she did mmost of the talking but we had a good time. i did not ask her about the messages my girlfriend threaghtened to send. maybe she got them maybe she did'nt. but let me tell you some of these women out here are the devil incarnet. don't read messages from girlfriends.

Debbie Guzzi July 22, 2012 at 2:32 PM This was very hard to do..what Dee asked of us I look forward to reading how others took on the task! Light & Love

Omojevwe Emmanuel Brown July 22, 2012 at 9:29 AM Nice for contest. I hope you will help he out Cyndi's I wish you the best. Nice reading your work today. Great!!!

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2012 at 5:07 PM I hope he "gets it right" and can be happy. This was a very interesting way to do Cyndi's contest. You are clever to think of it, Linda. Maybe I will try her contest. I am still thinking on Nette's. Well, good luck in her contest and it was nice seeing you today.

Sara Kendrick July 21, 2012 at 2:53 PM Great work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara

Bl Devnath July 21, 2012 at 2:09 PM Wonderfully expressed and done. Loved always bl

Russell Sivey July 21, 2012 at 1:14 PM This is a treasure of a poem my friend! I really enjoyed this piece of mighty advice! You know love very well Linda-Marie, and all the spoils therein! Great Work!!

Jack Horne July 21, 2012 at 11:17 AM love this powerful write, Linda-Marie. Congrats on all your wins - I'm still trying to think of something for your contest : )

Michael J. Falotico July 21, 2012 at 8:11 AM He will find his way Jersey Girl.... hot coals to the sand... Hope your well my luv... missing you.... hope to talk soon luv n hugs Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 21, 2012 at 7:34 AM guess we all go through pains of love with our children.. but Christopher never seems to learn.. oh well.. we still luv him.. renjoy poets..