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Tableau Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Joseph May. Date written: 08/17/2023

Inviting Twilight - Tableau

 beauteous full moon 
      shines brightly for us.
   there's so much promise 
         in our starry sky; 
     let's swim under this 
         inviting twilight!

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Kauffman Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 10:57 AM
So romantic Edward and so beautiful in the love you express! How was your twilight swim? Congrats and high fives for your win. Blessings!
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:33 PM
Thank you so much, Sam:-)
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:43 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Edward:) - hugs
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:32 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Miller Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 1:43 AM
Love the imagery in this write; congratulations
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Thank you very much, Terry:-)
Merryman Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:19 PM
Creative interpretation of the picture! Beautifully written, Edward! Blessings, Kim M
Merryman Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:22 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Edward! Blessings, Kim M
Hamilton Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 11:38 AM
A beautiful write, congrats on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Thank you very much, John:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations, Edward! Beautiful, Full, Shining brightly…so much promise in Our Starry Night! Makes me think of Van Gogh’s starry night and yet the thoughts are more glorious!
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:38 PM
Oh, that's one of my favorite paintings of Van Gogh! Thanks for the lovely visit, Kim:-)
Empress Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Wow so ethereal and celestial the way you’ve painted imagery here is absolutely stunning. Well deserved win. Congratulations my friend
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Inky:)
May Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Very nicely penned Ed, Congrats on your win
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations and my placement, Joseph:-)
Pandit Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 4:33 AM
Enjoyed your description of full moon and the promise of starry skies. Best to you, my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-) Always delightful to see your feedback, my friend.
Volumes Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:54 PM
A beautiful image created and then to see the picture, they match perfectly
Ibeh Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 7:29 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely visit, SV:-)
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