Inviting Eyes of Deception

A gentle,quite boy,not more than fourteen,
was lured by a much older girl
with lots of frickles and curly,red hair;
and her sweet name was Lucy...

We found our escape
in an alley where light never filtered;
it happened under
unexplained circumstances,
and as unfortunate as they might have been,
this adolescent suddenly lost
his virginity by the hands
of someone unregarding his mental state!
My aunt Rose caught me 
in that unacceptable behavior
and slapped me hard,and told me
not to do it again!

How many boys like me,
innocent and mellow,
went through that same stage;
and had somebody touch them
in the most unthinkable place?
And I should have told Mother..
when Lucy led me to explore
what was too early to know;
inviting eyes of deception,
why did you choose me
and take away my innocence?

Lucy,you hurt that boy,with an unknown word,
and I wash all your sin with my forgiveness,
never to remind again a sensation I didn't seek:    
to teach me what a growing child shouldn't have!  
Lucy,everything felt like kindness; 
and you gave for the wrong reasons,without guilt,
to get your reward of pleasure...
by offering me that intense desire
with inviting eyes of deception,
and harming me with intention!

Copyright 2008 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 14, 2009 at 8:26 AM
Andrew, congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Patty
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November 12, 2009 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Andrew! Sad but true issue for countless young boys and girls today. Peace and love, Audrey
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November 10, 2009 at 6:54 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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November 10, 2009 at 4:07 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Andrew. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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November 9, 2009 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I enjoyed reading it. Love Pam
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November 9, 2009 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week >> James
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November 8, 2009 at 11:52 PM
Congrats on your feaure this week Andrew.Rgds Brian
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July 21, 2008 at 11:46 AM
same thing happened to me with an older girl first time Ive thought bout it in 13 years cool poem
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