Inviting Eyes

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             Inviting Eyes

             Eyes invitation.
             Deep brown, I was newly lost.
             What mind I...love's cost?

         

             November 10, 2019

                   English Haiku
                      5/7/5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 11, 2019 at 4:22 AM
Why would you erase it? Because you had no comments?
Romios Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 1:34 PM
I have no answer for you. Silent One. Three comnents iare par for me on most. I have given up on expecting more. The few who do are dedicated friends. I never will be have more. It's fine. That's reality at tha Soup. I am no terrific poet. I get it.
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November 11, 2019 at 3:49 AM
Wonderful haiku, dear friend. Love - Gina
Romios Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Thank you, Gina
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 9:08 PM
Excellent! Perfectly penned haiku. :) gw
Romios Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Thank you, gw
One Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 4:00 PM
they say the eyes are window to the soul... but so many misread them... i hope it was not a bad experience..
Romios Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 5:20 PM
No, sweetheart. A very delicious one that changed the path of my life, forever. I was going to erase this one. It's very, very quiet and subtle. Glad you commented before I erased it Love, Panagiota
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