Invisible Woman

Although I couldn't see her I knew she was there.
     Her essence filled the room with her perfume in there.

She was an invisible woman in need.
     Her wet, musky sex speeding her greedy sin there.

Being invisible made it near impossible.
     For what she wanted me to do, the air seemed thin there.

Invisibility has it's perks as you well know.
     She can do everything that she wants to do with all men there.

Scanky yes, but what the hey, when it comes to the lay.
     She has that need to play, so all men will win there.

Do invisible rosebuds smell the same you all ask?
     Well if you can see this mans face, there's a grin there.

He's putting snow white flakes into this luscious rosebud.
     The beauty of it astonishes all women there.

The luscious rosebud clutches like a tight fitting glove.
      Invisible woman uses her rosebud when there.

I know this because I experienced her glove.
      I'm here to say that invisible woman's been there!



Note: For Jarad's contest....hope this is close enough!!  lol

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/28/2010 7:34:00 AM
Dear Marty, warm congratulations to you on this amazing Ghazal!!! It was very challenging! But will try it again..love a challenge..sometimes...Enjoy it Marty! ...Peace Audrey
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:58:00 PM
And you never even knew her name. :) Good write Marty. congrats on your success...Margaret
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:17:00 PM
Congrats Marty on your winning poem in Jared's contest.. amazing and awesome write and win..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/27/2010 12:35:00 PM
Congrats my friend... You have placed high in both of my contests and I am happy to award you with this second place rank.... Such a delight to read.... I must tell you my friend, when I read this poem for the first time I knew it would rank among the best.... Congratulations my friend and look forward to reading more in future contests.......:JP]
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Date: 4/26/2010 1:04:00 AM
Here you go again, this is great- you should do well lol
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:19:00 PM
This is terrific Marty and should place well in Jared's contest... my entry is "Volatility" and had some issues with the write ..new form..now Jared has posted a blog on his next contest "The Sestina" another form not familiar with but will attempt... read my comment to Mr. J... and good luck in his current contest..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/17/2010 6:49:00 AM
Oh, I love the story of your encounter with the "invisible woman," Marty. The title was so intriguing and you delivered in passionate style. This form is very challenging with all of the required internal rhymes, but I do like your entry! Good luck. Carolyn
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