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Invisible People

The people, I may never know Have touched my life completely so. The connections, that are formed Radiate with so much warmth. It's a gift from above, appreciated with Sincere love, a kind & written word Although our voices may never, be heard. There's nothing like reading a poem, It's just as beautiful as the sweetest song. In the depths of every soul, there's a magical possession That Unfolds. A message connecting us. Interpretations, a constant must. Of the things in life, We all share. Our dreams & hopes even when we dispair Our, disappointments & triumphs Wrapped inside, a few paragraphs, No matter what our social status Or where we are from on this planet, A tranquil voice, unheard echos in the midst Is worth more than a thousand words...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/23/2013 8:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 10/26/2013 6:44:00 AM
Hi richard,,, im glad you gave it a second round:) made my day....thankyou hugz cherie
Date: 10/12/2013 9:06:00 AM
A great tribute to all of us writers diligently pushing our message out there, very well done Cherie, Carl
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Date: 10/26/2013 6:42:00 AM
Thanks so much carl, its my pleasure. Just my way of saying thankyou:) appreciate your lovely comment, cherie<3
Date: 9/19/2013 12:25:00 PM
LOVE THE VERSES WELL SAID i AGREE XXDAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 9/20/2013 3:12:00 PM
Hi David thanks so much for your , kind comment:0) cherie
Date: 9/18/2013 3:27:00 PM
Well Cherie, that last verse really got to me...DEFINITELY worth more than a thousand words...You are truly becoming a very talented poet, you know that? Soup mail coming soon - Tim
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Date: 9/18/2013 10:16:00 PM
Hi Tim thanks so much for the, lovely compliment, comment & soup mail,,, I really appreciate your kindness & I replied. Have a great night Tim:) one <3 cherie:0)
Date: 9/17/2013 9:59:00 AM
Just love this cherie, a dedication to poetry,,, and also to you for bringing it to life with this wonderful rendering...
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Date: 9/17/2013 10:10:00 PM
Hi Harry,,, I really appreciate your lovely comment thanks so much :0) Cherie....
Date: 9/14/2013 4:08:00 PM
Hi Cherie.
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 9/14/2013 10:34:00 PM
Hi Richard hope, your enjoying the weekend:)
Date: 9/14/2013 5:58:00 AM
I love the flow and the words you used to make this a masterpiece. ..I really love this!! :)
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 9/14/2013 10:32:00 PM
Hi ink thanks so much,,,,,, you made my day:0) truly appreciate your kind comment:) Cherie....
Date: 9/13/2013 6:33:00 AM
Good morning Cherie, thanks for your thoughtful visit and comment.
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Date: 9/14/2013 5:59:00 PM
Hi Richard good eve your welcome . Hope your enjoying your weekend:)
Date: 9/11/2013 6:43:00 PM
Lovely :)
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 9/12/2013 6:30:00 PM
Hello jennifer, thanks so much for your kind comment,,, appreciate it:o) cherie
Date: 9/8/2013 12:57:00 AM
An endearing lovely warm poem. U exude such warmth u see, so fun readin u again. Hugs:)
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Date: 9/8/2013 9:12:00 PM
Hi s zaynub, appreciate your kind words greatly...thankyou cherie<3
Date: 9/3/2013 9:10:00 AM
Very, very well stated. Cherish those that matter, leave out the clutter. Awesome statements here!
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Date: 9/3/2013 3:15:00 PM
Hi Drake,,,thanks so much for those kind words, deeply appreciated:) Ty Cherie....
Date: 9/3/2013 4:38:00 AM
Sent you a CS mail Cherie
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 9/3/2013 3:16:00 PM
Hi m got it and replied Ty:)
Date: 9/2/2013 8:47:00 AM
I hope you are enjoying your mini vacation.
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 9/2/2013 3:40:00 PM
Hi Richard yes I am Ty 4 asking just in Atlantic city NJ for a quick getaway...I know it's not labour day in Canada, but happy labour day to you anyway lol:) ~<3~cherie
Date: 9/1/2013 7:18:00 PM
Got it. Grea poem.
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Date: 9/2/2013 3:37:00 PM
Thanks kilmer:0)
Date: 9/1/2013 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Cherie for warming my heart today. Truer words were never spoken. You hit this on on the head. Alway~Kilmer Peace and Love
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Date: 9/1/2013 3:43:00 PM
Hi kilmer,,,thanks so much for your kind Comment,,,you made my day:0)...I left you soupmail yesterday, hope you got it:0) hugz Cherie:)
Date: 8/31/2013 4:37:00 PM
Yes, poetry that carry our feelings are very important for us and those that read..Enjoyed reading this work today..Thanks for the visit today..Sara
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Date: 9/1/2013 3:51:00 PM
Hi Sara so glad you enjoyed it...appreciate your kind comment...thankyou:) Cherie....x
Date: 8/31/2013 6:37:00 AM
Good Morning Cherie, thanks for your visit. Have a great weekend.
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:42:00 AM
Hi Richard good morning:) your welcome I have a mini vacation this week, thanks for your lovely comments & enjoy your weekend to....<3 cherie
Date: 8/30/2013 6:13:00 PM
Hey Cherie, Well crafted thoughts here...Thanks for sharing.. Ken,,
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Date: 8/30/2013 6:16:00 PM
Hi ken, thanks always appreciate your kind & lovely comments, have a great weekend:0) cheriexx
Date: 8/29/2013 10:46:00 AM
I greatly enjoyed it, especially the last stanza. JM
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:28:00 AM
Hi jm thanks so much for taking time to read & comment, very much appreciated~cherie~
Date: 8/29/2013 1:36:00 AM
- A lovely poem and messages Cherie. - New day ... and we do not know what it will bring. - Hope your day will be fine. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:27:00 AM
Hi anne, ty 4 your kind comment:) so true...everdays a new adventure, thanks enjoy your day peace & ~<3~ cherie
Date: 8/28/2013 6:42:00 PM
Wow I can see and hear the invisible people with even more clarity! A fine piece Cherie.
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Date: 8/28/2013 8:27:00 PM
Lol richard thats a cool way to look at it, thanks so much always enjoy, reading your comments:0) cheriex
Date: 8/28/2013 5:32:00 PM
Your poem is both sound and I love the conversational and the rhyming aspect of it all. Its so nice to read from you again my friend. Is this a new poem? I always like perusing your philosophical thoughts....I'm hungry for more! We'll chat soon again. Love and light....Mustapha.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/31/2013 12:35:00 PM
You always say the nicest things. I sent you a CS mail. Your words are always encouraging to me. Talk to you soon again.
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/31/2013 11:39:00 AM
Hey M I almost missed this msg im not sure, if it was the last 1 you posted, I commented on it, excellent piece!! I know you put alot into it!! I loved it!! well written in truth, im glad you wrote it, it needed to be said. Your an awesome talent & a great friend to have peace & <3 always,, cherie
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 4:27:00 PM
I finally got around to finishing the poem that I've been composing so long...lol. I hope you enjoy the read my friend...hugs.
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/28/2013 8:21:00 PM
Lol m I will try my best to feed you, your to funny, M :0) thanks for your thoughtful comment I was kinda buzy for awhile and didnt get to post anything. Your last poem was awesome!!! We will catch up soon Mustapha....what a powerful name you have....bless up onelove <3 cherie
Date: 8/28/2013 11:38:00 AM
Hey Cherie, it's been a while -I know LOL! So this is an interesting poem here, it seems like you could perform this in a spoken word format. I like your rhyme sequence, it's a good poem and you're right, you never know who may touch your life -maybe one of those invisible people LOL! Good Job! MC
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Date: 8/28/2013 12:03:00 PM
Hi,,,Lol m.c. yes its has but glad to see you, my friend. thanks so much for commenting:) your very right, we just never know the invisible forces that impact us, daily. No way m.c. im way to chicken for spoken word omg L.O.L thats such a scarey thought ha ha ha, I always wanted to recite a poem in a nyc poetry jams but id shake, uncontrollably in my shoes:( lmao:0) <3 cherie

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