Invisible Path

The day that you eliminate 
The Invincible past
Is the same one that you illuminate 
The invisible path
I don't put any Credence,
In the statistical chance
A difficult task
May or may not be completed
You can measure a man 
By the mental hurdles
Stuck in his mind
He's convinced that he can't
Ever advance beyond
I think cementing your stance
Right there
Is just a rediculous plan
You have your suspicions You'll land
Flat on your face, good thing
Suspicions are for detectives
And i haven't seen anyone give you a badge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Bailey Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Very good write, John. We all have unfinished, unsolved problems along our walk. Not that we can't put to rest our fear of failure, but to have the faith to face and resolve the outcome.
Conde Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 3:22 PM
Thanks Avis, i just read a few of yours and you are definately talented also
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