Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Invisible Music Waves

As heavy banked clouds rolled across 
the sky, she picked up the broom.
A magical partner as she 
swept the cobwebs and room.

The Blue Danube ran through her head
Awe inspiring music
An orchestra only heard by 
her, deep thoughts played musing

Onto the porch she danced the "Beer
Barrel Polka's" lively beat
The broom stirring dust and cobwebs
As she kicked up her feet

From a distance upon the hill
He watched in excited dreams
How could he know love would capture
his heart, eyes fill with gleams

As intently he watched everyday
The dancer stole his heart
But now he knows how sad it is 
When the dancer falls apart

October 03, 2015
Inspired by Francine Robert's contest so I thought of this line

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Duke Beaufort October 13, 2015 at 3:53 AM It is sad indeed, however, we can only hope that after she made some kind of a recovery. Music does run inside some of us. Perhaps all of us. It's funny also that we don't always know what is going on inside the minds of others and what the struggles are. Have a great week.

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2015 at 8:06 PM oh maybe it was called Dancing as fast as I can??

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2015 at 8:06 PM From what you replied to my comment, it sounds like that book I once read, Dancing for my life?? I can't remember the title now but dancing was the symbol for how she tried to stay sane and then she had a mental breakdown! Maybe you know the story too and that also inspired this one?

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2015 at 1:38 AM this is a well crafted poem and I really like it. The last line implies that she changed or got sick or something? That was sad! Sara Kendrick October 9, 2015 at 8:10 AM I am implying that the dancer had a mental break down..Sad isn't it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Afolabi Muideen October 7, 2015 at 7:49 PM The smooth and eloquent flow of this write depicted imagery that makes the write to meet with the readers like and love..... A great and very beautiful descriptive. Excellent.........A.M. Sara Kendrick October 9, 2015 at 8:11 AM Your review of my work was uplifting..Sara

Emile Pinet October 7, 2015 at 1:24 PM The author uses good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece. And paints the scene with descriptive words that bring the essence of the experience into our conscious minds. Emile. Sara Kendrick October 9, 2015 at 8:12 AM Emile, You have developed a great technique in writing reviews of the poems..Your review was very helpful..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Nette Onclaud October 7, 2015 at 12:37 PM finely woven like a dance of life's mystical moments, sara... really enjoyed this superb piece!.. huggs Sara Kendrick October 9, 2015 at 8:13 AM Nette, Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam October 7, 2015 at 3:46 AM Excellent. Very beautiful and inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Sara Kendrick October 9, 2015 at 8:14 AM Thanks for reading it..I am glad that I wrote one that seems to be enjoyed.Your review was uplifting..Sara

Poet Destroyer A October 6, 2015 at 9:15 AM This is a beautiful and deep at the same time. Sara, I like the title very much. LINDA Sara Kendrick October 6, 2015 at 11:41 AM PD, Thanks for the visit and the review of my work that shows a good understanding..Your comments are uplifting and encouraging. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2015 at 12:28 PM - Beautiful with a tone of sadness, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick October 6, 2015 at 11:42 AM Yes, it is a little sad.. Sara

Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2015 at 7:38 PM I so enjoyed this piece Sara. Sara Kendrick October 6, 2015 at 11:42 AM I am delighted that I could write something that you would enjoy..Thanks for the visit. Sara

Monterey Sirak October 4, 2015 at 6:30 AM Great images! This is beautiful with a little bit of haunting sadness dancing through the melody. Sara Kendrick October 6, 2015 at 11:43 AM I like the review that says it has a little bit of haunting sadness..Thanks for the visit.. Sara

Robert Lindley October 3, 2015 at 9:18 PM A wonderful and calm inspiring joyful write my friend. A fine poem like this stirs the soul and lightens the heart. Adding this jewel to my fav list. A7 Sara Kendrick October 9, 2015 at 8:15 AM I am so honored that you would fav my work..Thanks for reading and I am glad that you enjoyed it..Sara

Jan Allison October 3, 2015 at 3:18 PM the imagery is delightful Sara reminded me of Cinderella with her broom:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Sara Kendrick October 6, 2015 at 11:44 AM Yes, I did think of Cinderella..Your review is uplifting.. Sara