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Invisible Music Waves

As heavy banked clouds rolled across the sky, she picked up the broom. A magical partner as she swept the cobwebs and room. The Blue Danube ran through her head Awe inspiring music An orchestra only heard by her, deep thoughts played musing Onto the porch she danced the "Beer Barrel Polka's" lively beat The broom stirring dust and cobwebs As she kicked up her feet From a distance upon the hill He watched in excited dreams How could he know love would capture his heart, eyes fill with gleams As intently he watched everyday The dancer stole his heart But now he knows how sad it is When the dancer falls apart October 03, 2015 Inspired by Francine Robert's contest so I thought of this line

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/13/2015 3:53:00 AM

It is sad indeed, however, we can only hope that after she made some kind of a recovery. Music does run inside some of us. Perhaps all of us. It's funny also that we don't always know what is going on inside the minds of others and what the struggles are. Have a great week.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2015 8:06:00 PM

From what you replied to my comment, it sounds like that book I once read, Dancing for my life?? I can't remember the title now but dancing was the symbol for how she tried to stay sane and then she had a mental breakdown! Maybe you know the story too and that also inspired this one?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2015 8:06:00 PM

oh maybe it was called Dancing as fast as I can??

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2015 1:38:00 AM

this is a well crafted poem and I really like it. The last line implies that she changed or got sick or something? That was sad!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2015 8:10:00 AM

I am implying that the dancer had a mental break down..Sad isn't it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/7/2015 7:49:00 PM

The smooth and eloquent flow of this write depicted imagery that makes the write to meet with the readers like and love..... A great and very beautiful descriptive. Excellent.........A.M.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2015 8:11:00 AM

Your review of my work was uplifting..Sara

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/7/2015 1:24:00 PM

The author uses good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece. And paints the scene with descriptive words that bring the essence of the experience into our conscious minds. Emile.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2015 8:12:00 AM

Emile, You have developed a great technique in writing reviews of the poems..Your review was very helpful..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2015 12:37:00 PM

finely woven like a dance of life's mystical moments, sara... really enjoyed this superb piece!.. huggs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2015 8:13:00 AM

Nette, Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/7/2015 3:46:00 AM

Excellent. Very beautiful and inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2015 8:14:00 AM

Thanks for reading it..I am glad that I wrote one that seems to be enjoyed.Your review was uplifting..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2015 9:15:00 AM

This is a beautiful and deep at the same time. Sara, I like the title very much. LINDA

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2015 11:41:00 AM

PD, Thanks for the visit and the review of my work that shows a good understanding..Your comments are uplifting and encouraging. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2015 12:28:00 PM

- Beautiful with a tone of sadness, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2015 11:42:00 AM

Yes, it is a little sad.. Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/4/2015 7:38:00 PM

I so enjoyed this piece Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2015 11:42:00 AM

I am delighted that I could write something that you would enjoy..Thanks for the visit. Sara

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/4/2015 6:30:00 AM

Great images! This is beautiful with a little bit of haunting sadness dancing through the melody.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2015 11:43:00 AM

I like the review that says it has a little bit of haunting sadness..Thanks for the visit.. Sara

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/3/2015 9:18:00 PM

A wonderful and calm inspiring joyful write my friend. A fine poem like this stirs the soul and lightens the heart. Adding this jewel to my fav list. A7

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2015 8:15:00 AM

I am so honored that you would fav my work..Thanks for reading and I am glad that you enjoyed it..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2015 3:18:00 PM

the imagery is delightful Sara reminded me of Cinderella with her broom:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2015 11:44:00 AM

Yes, I did think of Cinderella..Your review is uplifting.. Sara